Zombies! Hyena people! Snyder!

Student ,'Touched'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Lee - May 29, 2006 3:37:15 pm PDT #6843 of 10001
The feeling you get when your brain finally lets your heart get in its pants.

Love that, Ginger! Definition of comfort food, really.

buttered him

Though I think you didn't mean him there.


Typo Boy - May 30, 2006 8:22:54 am PDT #6844 of 10001
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

Love that too, even without the typing mistake. But though the typo is gone, the memory lingers on.

Oh and Allyson - insent


Strix - May 30, 2006 1:56:57 pm PDT #6845 of 10001
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger

COMFORT FOOD

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Flour dusting the bare countertop, the clean smell of real butter, chicken stewing in the battered pot on the gas stove.

Cobbler oozing sweet black juice, cooling under a stained but clean cheesecloth, awaiting the finishing dollop of vanilla ice cream.

Strong brewed tea in a glass carafe, still warm and smelling of sunshine from its day brewing on the back stoop.

Red blood shines on the kitchen faucet, Cashmere Bouquet dusting powder and viscera combining in a sweet melange of carnage.

Grandmothers make the best comfort food.


Connie Neil - May 30, 2006 6:21:24 pm PDT #6846 of 10001
brillig

foody bits

I have her recipes, but I can't re-create them. My mother's cooking was not the stuff of which 'home cooked' legends are made. But some of her dishes were the highlights of my youth.

Nothing exotic. Canned ham baked in a barbecue sauce. Meatloaf with cheese on the inside and the meat the perfect balance between dry and moist.

And fudge. My god, that fudge.

And her potato salad defined summer.

The very height of '50s-'60s middle class cuisine. I've learned to love complicated food and things I'd never heard of as a child. But I'd be a happy woman if I could taste that potato salad again.

And the meatloaf.

And the fudge.


Typo Boy - May 30, 2006 7:41:25 pm PDT #6847 of 10001
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

My first attempt at a woman's POV. That should not prevent merciless critiques; only way to learn. Dedicated to Ginger - cause I thought that typo deserved something special:

Comfort Food


An icy glare from Gleason is prelude to a hot tirade. “What are you, stupid? This is an important client, and you send the package third-day air? I don’t care if the due date is a week and a half away. I don’t care if I did say we had to cut down on shipping costs. You should have known better.”

I face Gleason, absolutely poker faced. He’s the kind of boss who always finds an excuse for rage. As his pasty white cheeks puff out and turn red. I remember clever dark hands, lean muscles and kind brown eyes. This morning Gleason has no power to bother me.

At lunchtime Gleason gives another to package to ship “while you are at it” on my lunch break. I pull out my sandwich, and calmly set the package aside. I think of knowing fingers helping me out of my dress, unhooking my bra, of long unhurried kisses. In a few days my desire to feed Gleason to the paper shredder will return, but right now other desires suppress the anger. For once I’m really ignoring him, not just pretending as I finish my apple.

I leave work fifteen minutes early to make the overnight FedEx deadline. I think of the rumors of Gleason’s on-line porn collection I heard at the water cooler today. The next time Gleason leaves early and forgets to log out, I’ll check it out. If the rumors are true, I think Gleason will “accidentally” set a task to forward them to the HR department.

As I approach home, pornographic images of my own cross my minds eye. I think about the comfort food waiting for me there, my hot buttered him.


Aims - May 30, 2006 7:53:04 pm PDT #6848 of 10001
Shit's all sorts of different now.

Comfort Food

My great-grandmother relied on the simple things during The Depression. Simple being inexpensive. Browned ground beef, beans, and cottage cheese. These were things always available and easy to get. It was the staple meal for her family of five, living in Detroit with few pennies to spare. No one ever complained, and conversation flowed freely. Anyone peeking through their window would see the love and warmth coming from that meal. No matter how bad things got, or how much money they didn’t have, they still had each other. Is it any wonder that my grandmother still makes it for us?


Typo Boy - May 30, 2006 7:55:20 pm PDT #6849 of 10001
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

Oohh nice Aimee. chili and beans were often a staple in our house growing up. We always had hamburger in the fridge and a pot of beans soaking on the stove. Not the same thing, but similar in spirit.


Aims - May 30, 2006 7:59:24 pm PDT #6850 of 10001
Shit's all sorts of different now.

LOVE that dinner.


Volans - May 30, 2006 10:39:46 pm PDT #6851 of 10001
move out and draw fire

Is it wrong that Erin's drabble made me laugh? In a shock reaction way, but still.


Strix - May 31, 2006 4:09:16 am PDT #6852 of 10001
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger

Raq, I was going for WTF? Yarg!BWAHA!, so as the author, I am happy with your reaction!

Oh, and Connie, the next time my mom makes my grandma's fudge, I'll have to sned some to you. It is quintessential grandma fudge. My mom is not the world's greatest cook, but her fudge fuckin' rocks.