Nah, Erin. We're all just in resting mode after the F2F. I love what you posted of your story so far. Are you going to give us more?
But she was naked! And all... articulate!
Mal ,'Our Mrs. Reynolds'
The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...
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SailAweigh - May 25, 2006 5:28:03 pm PDT #6754 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb
Strix - May 25, 2006 5:29:06 pm PDT #6755 of 10001
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger
I have more, yes. I just didn't want to innundate with the unwanted,
SailAweigh - May 25, 2006 5:34:09 pm PDT #6756 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb
Oh, hell, no! We want. Gimme.
Strix - May 25, 2006 5:44:26 pm PDT #6757 of 10001
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger
Strix - May 25, 2006 5:44:31 pm PDT #6758 of 10001
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger
Strix - May 25, 2006 5:44:36 pm PDT #6759 of 10001
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger
Strix - May 25, 2006 5:44:41 pm PDT #6760 of 10001
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger
Strix - May 25, 2006 5:44:46 pm PDT #6761 of 10001
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger
SailAweigh - May 25, 2006 6:03:53 pm PDT #6762 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb
I like the way you're setting up the reveal, here. A little drib here, a little drab there. Also, "Mr. Inscrutable!" Hee. Are you looking for a beta? I would be more than happy to help, vampire stories are my favorite right now.
deborah grabien - May 25, 2006 10:06:49 pm PDT #6763 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Erin, one thing to remember. If you're planning on trying to get it published, get it offline, and fast. Once it's up in a public forum, it falls under the heading of "already published" and major houses shy away for a variety of reasons.
Lock it down in an unpublic forum - locked-down livejournal - and give people the key. But a public board posting can invalidate some of your publishing options.