Oh, hell, no! We want. Gimme.
The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...
A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.
I like the way you're setting up the reveal, here. A little drib here, a little drab there. Also, "Mr. Inscrutable!" Hee. Are you looking for a beta? I would be more than happy to help, vampire stories are my favorite right now.
Erin, one thing to remember. If you're planning on trying to get it published, get it offline, and fast. Once it's up in a public forum, it falls under the heading of "already published" and major houses shy away for a variety of reasons.
Lock it down in an unpublic forum - locked-down livejournal - and give people the key. But a public board posting can invalidate some of your publishing options.
AH! Deb, thank you for your timely advice. I would like to, actually, this is my summer project.
Sail, I would love a beta. Email addy? I have 3 chapters, but schools out Tuesday, so I will be adding more since I will have time, sweet time, off.
Erin, email is dinky40 at charter dot net.
Deb - glad you caught that, I was thinking about that this morning with no time to post.