Oh, hell, no! We want. Gimme.
See, Vera? Dress yourself up; you get taken out somewhere fun.
Jayne ,'Our Mrs. Reynolds'
The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...
A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.
SailAweigh - May 25, 2006 5:34:09 pm PDT #6756 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb
Strix - May 25, 2006 5:44:26 pm PDT #6757 of 10001
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger
Strix - May 25, 2006 5:44:31 pm PDT #6758 of 10001
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger
Strix - May 25, 2006 5:44:36 pm PDT #6759 of 10001
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger
Strix - May 25, 2006 5:44:41 pm PDT #6760 of 10001
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger
Strix - May 25, 2006 5:44:46 pm PDT #6761 of 10001
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger
SailAweigh - May 25, 2006 6:03:53 pm PDT #6762 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb
I like the way you're setting up the reveal, here. A little drib here, a little drab there. Also, "Mr. Inscrutable!" Hee. Are you looking for a beta? I would be more than happy to help, vampire stories are my favorite right now.
deborah grabien - May 25, 2006 10:06:49 pm PDT #6763 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Erin, one thing to remember. If you're planning on trying to get it published, get it offline, and fast. Once it's up in a public forum, it falls under the heading of "already published" and major houses shy away for a variety of reasons.
Lock it down in an unpublic forum - locked-down livejournal - and give people the key. But a public board posting can invalidate some of your publishing options.
Strix - May 26, 2006 3:07:27 am PDT #6764 of 10001
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger
AH! Deb, thank you for your timely advice. I would like to, actually, this is my summer project.
Sail, I would love a beta. Email addy? I have 3 chapters, but schools out Tuesday, so I will be adding more since I will have time, sweet time, off.
SailAweigh - May 26, 2006 5:37:30 am PDT #6765 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb
Erin, email is dinky40 at charter dot net.
Deb - glad you caught that, I was thinking about that this morning with no time to post.