Wow, I totally killed it dead. Deader than a dead naked mole rat.
Prepare to uncouple -- uncouple.
Oz ,'Same Time, Same Place'
The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...
A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.
Strix - May 25, 2006 5:20:00 pm PDT #6753 of 10001
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger
SailAweigh - May 25, 2006 5:28:03 pm PDT #6754 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb
Nah, Erin. We're all just in resting mode after the F2F. I love what you posted of your story so far. Are you going to give us more?
Strix - May 25, 2006 5:29:06 pm PDT #6755 of 10001
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger
I have more, yes. I just didn't want to innundate with the unwanted,
SailAweigh - May 25, 2006 5:34:09 pm PDT #6756 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb
Oh, hell, no! We want. Gimme.
Strix - May 25, 2006 5:44:26 pm PDT #6757 of 10001
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger
Strix - May 25, 2006 5:44:31 pm PDT #6758 of 10001
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger
Strix - May 25, 2006 5:44:36 pm PDT #6759 of 10001
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger
Strix - May 25, 2006 5:44:41 pm PDT #6760 of 10001
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger
Strix - May 25, 2006 5:44:46 pm PDT #6761 of 10001
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger
SailAweigh - May 25, 2006 6:03:53 pm PDT #6762 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb
I like the way you're setting up the reveal, here. A little drib here, a little drab there. Also, "Mr. Inscrutable!" Hee. Are you looking for a beta? I would be more than happy to help, vampire stories are my favorite right now.