I'm not sure I can compete with the crumpet of sex. I'll ponder.
Inara: I think she looks adorable. Mal: Yeah, but I never said it.
'Shindig'
The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...
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Ginger - May 09, 2005 9:49:02 am PDT #1923 of 10001
"It didn't taste good. It tasted soooo horrible. It tasted like....a vodka martini." - Matilda
deborah grabien - May 09, 2005 9:50:42 am PDT #1924 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
I'm not sure I can compete with the crumpet of sex.
The untoasted crumpet of sex, please.
I'm actually really happy with my "bad night philosophy" once. It's an exercise in long, droney, run-on sentences.
Astarte - May 09, 2005 10:10:42 am PDT #1925 of 10001
Not having has never been the thing I've regretted most in my life. Not trying is.
The One He Didn't See Coming
It was quiet tonight. Too quiet.
He’d been at the front too long.. His piercing blue eyes penetrated the new mooned night. Little movement from his vantage point even when his weathered face scrunched his crow’s feet into deep, ravaged furrows.
Too damn quiet. Hadn’t been a night without gunfire and mangled screams since the truce was broken. Not that it mattered much. He had nothing to go back to.
He pulled her last letter out of his shirt pocket, streaked and torn.
He had just unfolded it one last time when the bullet-the one you never hear-entered his brainpan.
deborah grabien - May 09, 2005 10:20:56 am PDT #1926 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
His piercing blue eyes penetrated the new mooned night.
whimper
Astarte - May 09, 2005 10:22:57 am PDT #1927 of 10001
Not having has never been the thing I've regretted most in my life. Not trying is.
Hee. Take that Untoasted Crumpet Girl.
deborah grabien - May 09, 2005 10:24:09 am PDT #1928 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Take that Untoasted Crumpet Girl.
Nothing can defeat the Buttery Untoasted Crumpet of Love!
Astarte - May 09, 2005 10:28:36 am PDT #1929 of 10001
Not having has never been the thing I've regretted most in my life. Not trying is.
Somebody's new moon pierced by blue eyes begs to differ...
deborah grabien - May 09, 2005 10:31:45 am PDT #1930 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Somebody's new moon pierced by blue eyes begs to differ...
pftpftpftph.
Where's your pointless repetition? Where are all the staccato individual words chopped out of perfectly good sentences? Where's your grotesquely overdone use of adverbs, missy?
Huh? Huh?
(although, I actually think my "night" drabble is worse than my "porn" drabble.)
Astarte - May 09, 2005 10:34:55 am PDT #1931 of 10001
Not having has never been the thing I've regretted most in my life. Not trying is.
Hey, I have more practice trying to make my bad writing good than bad writing left whimpering on its own.
I tried the non-linear over metaphored angle meself.
Although, I do bow to the flowery badness that is your Night drabble, in all candor.
deborah grabien - May 09, 2005 10:36:01 am PDT #1932 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Although, I do bow to the flowery badness that is your Night drabble, in all candor.
Thank you! Doesn't it suck?
Man, bad writing on purpose? Hard.