Just keep walking, preacher-man.

River ,'Jaynestown'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Pix - May 01, 2005 3:24:17 pm PDT #1561 of 10001
We're all getting played with, babe. -Weird Barbie

cliché drabble: Home is Where the Heart Is

My roots stretch deep into the history that saturates the earth beneath the house’s foundation. I can see the ghosts of pumpkins my grandfather harvested from that garden at Halloween, and when the sun slants at dusk, shadows of my childhood still stretch across the lawn. I love this place.

But.

My heart is weaving down a coastal highway 3000 miles away. Bougainvillea twines through my fingers and tugs me westward, promises me it will brighten every March to come. Elephant seals beckon as they scoop sand across their backs, and a new ocean murmurs to me: home, home, home.


SailAweigh - May 01, 2005 3:26:34 pm PDT #1562 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

Kristin, that's lovely. I know that feeling.


erikaj - May 01, 2005 7:24:31 pm PDT #1563 of 10001
I'm a fucking amazing catch!--Fiona Gallagher, Shameless(US)

wrod.


deborah grabien - May 01, 2005 8:36:10 pm PDT #1564 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Yes, indeed. A gorgeous couple of drabbles.

I'm all bouncy for Allyson. Want good things to happen.


Beverly - May 01, 2005 10:03:31 pm PDT #1565 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

Fingers crossed for Allyson. I think we've all felt a version of Kristin's, which is why it tugs at us.

Personally? I'm over the moon in love with Ginger's beautifully cliche-ridden (heh) piece.


deborah grabien - May 02, 2005 7:27:38 am PDT #1566 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Ginger's knocked me out.

And it's Monday, which means our Tep, when time permitting, needs to give us a new topic.

BTW, I meant to ask this earlier, with memory like sieve: have we done "home" as a topic yet? I think we have...


Steph L. - May 02, 2005 8:55:45 am PDT #1567 of 10001
the hardest to learn / was the least complicated

I went back and checked all the previous topics, and we actually haven't done "home" yet. So, let's do it. But with a little something extra.

Challenge #55 (cliches) is now closed.

Challenge #56 is home, and the little something extra is this -- I pulled a handful of photos from the Look At Me website for you to use in your drabbles. Take a picture, and see how you can drabble it and "home" together.

As always, FEEL FREE to do your own thing -- just drabble "home," w/o using a picture. Or if a picture really wants to be drabbled, but not about home, then drabble it however it wants to be written.

If at all possible, though, I'd love to see what people come up with when combining the topic and the pictures.

One.

Two.

Three.

Four.

Five.

Six.

If you do use a picture, remember to link to the one you pick.


deborah grabien - May 02, 2005 9:05:08 am PDT #1568 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

For Picture Number Four

From Vishnu's Bounty

She stands in sunlight, the baby in her arms, waiting to be fed.

This land, scorched with heat now, will be buried like Atlantis when the monsoons hit. The rain will be torrential, a living thing, the clouds all she will be able to see through the crippling downpour. The river where she washes the baby will no longer be peaceful; springing from Vishnu's feet, it will nourish, raze, destroy.

Her feet are as rooted to this river as Vishnu himself. Famine, heat, bloated bodies fouling the banks - it makes no difference. She has known, and will know, no other home.


Susan W. - May 02, 2005 9:18:02 am PDT #1569 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

That's wonderful, Deb.

For Photo # 1: [link]

Before he enlisted, Hugh and Margaret used to drive to the top of the ridge on Saturdays and look down across the valley. “There’s our farm,” he’d say, and point to the land his father had promised him, land where corn grew tall and black-and-white cows grew fat and gave sweet milk.

Before he lies down to sleep each night and just as he awakens each morning he looks at the picture. He fills in the colors--the many greens of the valley, the gentle, hazy blue of the summer sky, the glossy brown of Margaret’s hair and her steady hazel eyes.

He fights to live. He fights to go home.


deborah grabien - May 02, 2005 9:25:45 am PDT #1570 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Susan, that's a lovely piece.