What you did to me was unbelievable, Connor. But then I got stuck in a hell dimension by my girlfriend one time for a hundred years, so three months under the ocean actually gave me perspective. Kind of a M.C. Escher perspective, but I did get time to think.

Angel ,'Conviction (1)'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

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Susan W. - May 02, 2005 9:18:02 am PDT #1569 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

That's wonderful, Deb.

For Photo # 1: [link]

Before he enlisted, Hugh and Margaret used to drive to the top of the ridge on Saturdays and look down across the valley. “There’s our farm,” he’d say, and point to the land his father had promised him, land where corn grew tall and black-and-white cows grew fat and gave sweet milk.

Before he lies down to sleep each night and just as he awakens each morning he looks at the picture. He fills in the colors--the many greens of the valley, the gentle, hazy blue of the summer sky, the glossy brown of Margaret’s hair and her steady hazel eyes.

He fights to live. He fights to go home.


deborah grabien - May 02, 2005 9:25:45 am PDT #1570 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Susan, that's a lovely piece.


Aims - May 02, 2005 9:28:54 am PDT #1571 of 10001
Shit's all sorts of different now.

One.

That morning, I went to the mailbox expecting the usual. Looking through the junk, the envelope fell onto the sidewalk. The handwriting was my own from sixty years ago. “Return to Sender – US ARMY” stamped on it.

My own words of love, words of promise, of great news to share. I miss you, I want you, I need you. Please come home soon, I can’t do this with out you.

My brother took the picture on our way home from the doctor’s office. Jim proposed there. We spent our last night there. It was the last spot we made love. I can smell junipers and jasmine.

After we got word, I couldn’t leave this place. It was home. The closest thing I had to him

(A little long)


Aims - May 02, 2005 9:29:16 am PDT #1572 of 10001
Shit's all sorts of different now.

And, Susan and I are in the same brain space.


Susan W. - May 02, 2005 9:31:46 am PDT #1573 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

That picture made me think of northeast Pennsylvania, where I used to try to go every summer when I lived in Philly so I could stand on hills and look at corn growing. I don't think it actually is PA--the hills aren't quite the right shape. But that's what it made me think of, and I took the note on the picture and went from there.


Susan W. - May 02, 2005 9:32:23 am PDT #1574 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

And Aimee makes me all misty-eyed!


Aims - May 02, 2005 9:32:25 am PDT #1575 of 10001
Shit's all sorts of different now.

Funny - it reminds me of California. Specifically, the pictures Kristin linked to from her drive down the coast.


deborah grabien - May 02, 2005 9:34:07 am PDT #1576 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Oh, Aimee, how lovely and ghosty.


Susan W. - May 02, 2005 9:35:03 am PDT #1577 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

If I had to guess where it actually is, I'd say Oregon or Washington, by the number of trees and the angles of the hills. But it still pinged my rural Pennsylvania brainspace somehow--probably because that's one of the places I'm intermittently homesick for.


Aims - May 02, 2005 9:35:46 am PDT #1578 of 10001
Shit's all sorts of different now.

I feel the same way about northern Michigan.