You're right. He's evil. But you should see him naked. I mean really!

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The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


erikaj - May 01, 2005 7:24:31 pm PDT #1563 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

wrod.


deborah grabien - May 01, 2005 8:36:10 pm PDT #1564 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Yes, indeed. A gorgeous couple of drabbles.

I'm all bouncy for Allyson. Want good things to happen.


Beverly - May 01, 2005 10:03:31 pm PDT #1565 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

Fingers crossed for Allyson. I think we've all felt a version of Kristin's, which is why it tugs at us.

Personally? I'm over the moon in love with Ginger's beautifully cliche-ridden (heh) piece.


deborah grabien - May 02, 2005 7:27:38 am PDT #1566 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Ginger's knocked me out.

And it's Monday, which means our Tep, when time permitting, needs to give us a new topic.

BTW, I meant to ask this earlier, with memory like sieve: have we done "home" as a topic yet? I think we have...


Steph L. - May 02, 2005 8:55:45 am PDT #1567 of 10001
Unusually and exceedingly peculiar and altogether quite impossible to describe

I went back and checked all the previous topics, and we actually haven't done "home" yet. So, let's do it. But with a little something extra.

Challenge #55 (cliches) is now closed.

Challenge #56 is home, and the little something extra is this -- I pulled a handful of photos from the Look At Me website for you to use in your drabbles. Take a picture, and see how you can drabble it and "home" together.

As always, FEEL FREE to do your own thing -- just drabble "home," w/o using a picture. Or if a picture really wants to be drabbled, but not about home, then drabble it however it wants to be written.

If at all possible, though, I'd love to see what people come up with when combining the topic and the pictures.

One.

Two.

Three.

Four.

Five.

Six.

If you do use a picture, remember to link to the one you pick.


deborah grabien - May 02, 2005 9:05:08 am PDT #1568 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

For Picture Number Four

From Vishnu's Bounty

She stands in sunlight, the baby in her arms, waiting to be fed.

This land, scorched with heat now, will be buried like Atlantis when the monsoons hit. The rain will be torrential, a living thing, the clouds all she will be able to see through the crippling downpour. The river where she washes the baby will no longer be peaceful; springing from Vishnu's feet, it will nourish, raze, destroy.

Her feet are as rooted to this river as Vishnu himself. Famine, heat, bloated bodies fouling the banks - it makes no difference. She has known, and will know, no other home.


Susan W. - May 02, 2005 9:18:02 am PDT #1569 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

That's wonderful, Deb.

For Photo # 1: [link]

Before he enlisted, Hugh and Margaret used to drive to the top of the ridge on Saturdays and look down across the valley. “There’s our farm,” he’d say, and point to the land his father had promised him, land where corn grew tall and black-and-white cows grew fat and gave sweet milk.

Before he lies down to sleep each night and just as he awakens each morning he looks at the picture. He fills in the colors--the many greens of the valley, the gentle, hazy blue of the summer sky, the glossy brown of Margaret’s hair and her steady hazel eyes.

He fights to live. He fights to go home.


deborah grabien - May 02, 2005 9:25:45 am PDT #1570 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Susan, that's a lovely piece.


Aims - May 02, 2005 9:28:54 am PDT #1571 of 10001
Shit's all sorts of different now.

One.

That morning, I went to the mailbox expecting the usual. Looking through the junk, the envelope fell onto the sidewalk. The handwriting was my own from sixty years ago. “Return to Sender – US ARMY” stamped on it.

My own words of love, words of promise, of great news to share. I miss you, I want you, I need you. Please come home soon, I can’t do this with out you.

My brother took the picture on our way home from the doctor’s office. Jim proposed there. We spent our last night there. It was the last spot we made love. I can smell junipers and jasmine.

After we got word, I couldn’t leave this place. It was home. The closest thing I had to him

(A little long)


Aims - May 02, 2005 9:29:16 am PDT #1572 of 10001
Shit's all sorts of different now.

And, Susan and I are in the same brain space.