Fuck it, we all know I'm really Mel.

No, I think Allyson thinks you're all of them.

Numfar, do the dance of nipple clamps and leather whips!

Web thinks you should dance.

Then I'm going to have to get drunk really fast. But if Web says... Now where's my nail polish?

I just finished watching the episode. I was surprised by it being the detective. I always thought Rebecca was the one who made the page. I like the characters and much of the dialogue, but so far the plots have not really held my interest.

Kristen, she might have something there.

Though I did give Paul my middle name. Not as a middle name. As a first name.

I'm just waiting to find out that Paul changed his name from Saul.

I could argue that the doorman was a more pointless, more suspicious character.

Yeah, kinda what the network said, except I thought he was so obvious that he was clearly a red herring.

My note would have said that you should introduce the cop much later. Some of it was the timing -- he was there early enough that I had time to think about him, and his mention of the fishing trip and the old files both sounded like plot points.

I don't think it was awful. Just one of those things where I saw the wires too soon. But I'm kind of hypersensitive to them, so I'm not a good sample.

well, give it another week if you can, sj, next week is plotty mcplotty. As I continued to write these things, I started making my act twos essentially act threes which seemed to do a thing.