With that first bit of the passage, I'd have thought the guy was peeing. I guess that is a major sign of bad-fic, if it's hard for the reader to tell which bodily function is being engaged in.
The Bay City Rollers, now that's music.
Giles ,'Sleeper'
Boxed Set, Vol. 1: Smallville, Due South, Farscape
A topic for the discussion of Farscape, Smallville, and Due South. Beware possible invasions of Stargate, Highlander, or pretty much anything else that captures our fancy. Expect Adult Content and discussion of the Big Gay Sex.
Madrigal Costello - Oct 20, 2003 12:12:14 pm PDT #1241 of 10000
It's a remora, dimwit.
§ ita § - Oct 20, 2003 12:13:10 pm PDT #1242 of 10000
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.
Christ, askye, why did you have to do that to me?
Trudy Booth - Oct 20, 2003 12:13:20 pm PDT #1243 of 10000
Greece's financial crisis threatens to take down all of Western civilization - a civilization they themselves founded. A rather tragic irony - which is something they also invented. - Jon Stewart
I was amused how Mrs. Kent took time to sterilize the blade that her husband used to fish the only-thing-that-can-hurt-him out of their invunerable son.
Madrigal Costello - Oct 20, 2003 12:14:38 pm PDT #1244 of 10000
It's a remora, dimwit.
My fanwank was that the hot knife was meant to cauterize parts of the wound so not to risk Clark bleeding to death before they got it out.
askye - Oct 20, 2003 12:15:16 pm PDT #1245 of 10000
Thrive to spite them
Mad--I added in the paragraph about explains Ray's prediciment.
ita--I'm sorry I promise I won't do this anymore. I can offer you a spork if you'd like to blind yourself.
Theodosia - Oct 20, 2003 12:17:04 pm PDT #1246 of 10000
'we all walk this earth feeling we are frauds. The trick is to be grateful and hope the caper doesn't end any time soon"
Looking at Fraser and Ray didn't respond at first. Then after a few seconds, he said. "You know that Vecchio and I can't stand each other so naturally, I would've refused. But, if I liked him then, yeh, I would've slept with him cause he looks like he'd be a very passionate lover. I think that we would be really great in bed, together cause we're two very passionate men, so yeh, I'd do it."
Holli - Oct 20, 2003 12:18:26 pm PDT #1247 of 10000
an overblown libretto and a sumptuous score/ could never contain the contradictions I adore
Or even just x-tra sparky men.
I read this as "sparkly," and thought "So, members of boy bands, then?"
Trudy Booth - Oct 20, 2003 12:18:39 pm PDT #1248 of 10000
Greece's financial crisis threatens to take down all of Western civilization - a civilization they themselves founded. A rather tragic irony - which is something they also invented. - Jon Stewart
They should take a hunk of kryptonite and make a knife out of it for just such an emergency.
Holli - Oct 20, 2003 12:19:48 pm PDT #1249 of 10000
an overblown libretto and a sumptuous score/ could never contain the contradictions I adore
Hee. Kryptoknife. Hee hee.
Why am I so damn loopy today? Jesus.
Matt the Bruins fan - Oct 20, 2003 12:22:57 pm PDT #1250 of 10000
"I remember when they eventually introduced that drug kingpin who murdered people and smuggled drugs inside snakes and I was like 'Finally. A normal person.'” —RahvinDragand
But what if it was like obsidian, and might leave slivers of itself behind?
This is not how a cock throbs.
Not unless someone is doing something seriously wrong, anyway.