Niska: Mr. Reynolds? You died, Mr. Reynolds. Mal: Seemed like the thing to do.

'War Stories'


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Off-topic discussion. Wanna talk about corsets, duct tape, or physics? This is the place. Detailed discussion of any current-season TV must be whitefonted.


Vortex - Sep 24, 2009 11:05:05 am PDT #10741 of 30001
"Cry havoc and let slip the boobs of war!" -- Miracleman

When I use the passive voice, it's usually either to add some variety or to not place blame when someone was supposed to do something and didn't.


Seska (the Watcher-in-Training) - Sep 24, 2009 11:08:07 am PDT #10742 of 30001
"We're all stories, in the end. Just make it a good one, eh?"

I've had to do a lot of passive voice killing in my writing.

It's hard to avoid in academic writing - but that irritates me. I use it where necessary, but I refuse to write such phrases as 'The author of this paper concludes that...' which one of my teachers in research methods class actually advocated. Ugh.


smonster - Sep 24, 2009 11:08:33 am PDT #10743 of 30001
We won’t stop until everyone is gay.

The whole French school system is pretty much based on this--or rather, highlighting both the bad and the good. I remembered a few incidents in grad school when a French TA or professor didn't understand that calling someone out for shoddy work or a bad grade was something just not done.

The year I studied in France the exchange program from our school would take the grade the teacher gave us, compare it with other native and exchange students in the class, factor in somehow the teacher's evaluation of us and our evaluation of the teacher, and *somehow* come up with a grade. I got a 12/20 in French lit and a 16/20 in Prehistory (he was so nice to me, for me to get that grade on an oral exam on a randomly chosen subject). My American GPA went up.

I heard many times the explanation that they're really tough at University, especially the first year, because it's so cheap for French students to go to college that they need to weed a bunch out. I don't know how true this is, or was in 1996, anyway.


tommyrot - Sep 24, 2009 11:08:55 am PDT #10744 of 30001
Sir, it's not an offence to let your cat eat your bacon. Okay? And we don't arrest cats, I'm very sorry.

It's hard to avoid in academic writing - but that irritates me. I use it where necessary, but I refuse to write such phrases as 'The author of this paper concludes,' which one of my teachers in research methods class actually advocated. Ugh.

The author of this post concludes you are correct.


Aims - Sep 24, 2009 11:09:38 am PDT #10745 of 30001
Shit's all sorts of different now.

If the only thing the student takes away from this class is not to use textspeak, then that's entirely on the student and not on the teacher. And I say that not as this particular teacher's sister, but because of my own beliefs on education.

There are going to be teachers that as a student, you don't like, and that are not going treat every student as that student feel they should be treated. Or, they are going to expect things that that student is going to disagree with. But the student has the choice to get past that and learn or sit there and focus on the fact that they think the teacher sucks.


Seska (the Watcher-in-Training) - Sep 24, 2009 11:10:25 am PDT #10746 of 30001
"We're all stories, in the end. Just make it a good one, eh?"

The author of this post concludes you are correct.

It is good that this fact is now known by me.


Jesse - Sep 24, 2009 11:10:59 am PDT #10747 of 30001
Sometimes I trip on how happy we could be.

I'd rather say "the author conclueds," than "it was concluded that." Concluded by who?? WHOM???


Gudanov - Sep 24, 2009 11:12:17 am PDT #10748 of 30001
Coding and Sleeping

I also try to avoid starting any sentence or clause with 'it was'.


Seska (the Watcher-in-Training) - Sep 24, 2009 11:13:19 am PDT #10749 of 30001
"We're all stories, in the end. Just make it a good one, eh?"

I'd rather say "the author conclueds," than "it was concluded that."

I'm in favour of writing 'I conclude.' Apparently the academic community doesn't like this construction. I don't care. I'm the one who's bloody well concluding.


Amy - Sep 24, 2009 11:13:47 am PDT #10750 of 30001
Because books.

I also try to avoid starting any sentence or clause with 'it was'.

But then we'd have no, "It was a dark and stormy night"!