That would be hilarious, Erin. (Of course, I laugh at sick shit.)
Am I supposed to be changing my clothes a lot? Is that the helpful thing to do?
Anya ,'Storyteller'
The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?
A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.
erikaj - Oct 01, 2008 1:19:19 pm PDT #953 of 6687
Always Anti-fascist!
Strix - Oct 01, 2008 1:23:46 pm PDT #954 of 6687
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger
So do I. Heh. Don't tempt me.
"Your COBRA payment is 236.16."
"Don't front like my shit's not...wait, FUCK you!"
Jesse - Oct 01, 2008 2:14:36 pm PDT #955 of 6687
Sometimes I trip on how happy we could be.
It was in response to her sounding out the word he had tattooed on his chest in Gothic lettering as the Spanish word for beach.
Ha ha ha!!
Strix - Oct 01, 2008 3:59:05 pm PDT #956 of 6687
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger
Dor. I just got that. It only took 4 hours.
D'OH!
lisah - Oct 01, 2008 5:26:40 pm PDT #957 of 6687
Punishingly Intricate
heh. She was totally fronting like his shit wasn't tight, by the way.
Strix - Oct 01, 2008 5:59:10 pm PDT #958 of 6687
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger
Barb - Oct 02, 2008 11:35:40 am PDT #959 of 6687
“Not dead yet!”
Oh, lovely GWWers-- I need a reasonably cold read on my sixties story. Currently at six chapters. Not so much with the nuts and boltage, but more for flow, emotional depth and connection, and overall making sense. (Of course, if something really sucks or doesn't make sense, please, to let me know.)
Any takers?
And Amy, if you still haven't had time to read but would still like to, let me know and I'll send along fresh copy.
erikaj - Oct 02, 2008 11:42:27 am PDT #960 of 6687
Always Anti-fascist!
I could try, Barb.ETA: It's my ability to give good feedback I question, but I'd really like to read it!
Amy - Oct 02, 2008 1:52:25 pm PDT #961 of 6687
Because books.
And Amy, if you still haven't had time to read but would still like to, let me know and I'll send along fresh copy.
Yes, please! And I'm SO SORRY.
::hangs head::
Barb - Oct 02, 2008 2:05:40 pm PDT #962 of 6687
“Not dead yet!”
Erika, feedback with a capital "F" isn't always what's needed. And there's generally always something of value to be found in feedback of any sort, once we get past the knee-jerk "oh holy SHIT" reactions. *g*
Yes, please! And I'm SO SORRY.
Um, why? Real life gets in the way. Pretty boys to relieve the stresses of real life should get in the way. I know if I needed Feedback! Now! because this was about to go out on submission, I know you'd get it to me.
No worries. ::pets and gropes Amy::