It was in response to her sounding out the word he had tattooed on his chest in Gothic lettering as the Spanish word for beach.
Ha ha ha!!
Gunn: The final score can't be rigged. I don't care how many players you grease, that last shot always comes up a question mark. But here's the thing. You never know when you're taking it. It could be when you're duking it out with the Legion of Doom, or just crossing the street deciding where to have brunch. So you just treat it like it was up to you—the world in balance—'cause you never know when it is.
'Underneath'
The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?
A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.
Jesse - Oct 01, 2008 2:14:36 pm PDT #955 of 6687
Sometimes I trip on how happy we could be.
Strix - Oct 01, 2008 3:59:05 pm PDT #956 of 6687
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger
Dor. I just got that. It only took 4 hours.
D'OH!
lisah - Oct 01, 2008 5:26:40 pm PDT #957 of 6687
Punishingly Intricate
heh. She was totally fronting like his shit wasn't tight, by the way.
Strix - Oct 01, 2008 5:59:10 pm PDT #958 of 6687
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger
Barb - Oct 02, 2008 11:35:40 am PDT #959 of 6687
“Not dead yet!”
Oh, lovely GWWers-- I need a reasonably cold read on my sixties story. Currently at six chapters. Not so much with the nuts and boltage, but more for flow, emotional depth and connection, and overall making sense. (Of course, if something really sucks or doesn't make sense, please, to let me know.)
Any takers?
And Amy, if you still haven't had time to read but would still like to, let me know and I'll send along fresh copy.
erikaj - Oct 02, 2008 11:42:27 am PDT #960 of 6687
Always Anti-fascist!
I could try, Barb.ETA: It's my ability to give good feedback I question, but I'd really like to read it!
Amy - Oct 02, 2008 1:52:25 pm PDT #961 of 6687
Because books.
And Amy, if you still haven't had time to read but would still like to, let me know and I'll send along fresh copy.
Yes, please! And I'm SO SORRY.
::hangs head::
Barb - Oct 02, 2008 2:05:40 pm PDT #962 of 6687
“Not dead yet!”
Erika, feedback with a capital "F" isn't always what's needed. And there's generally always something of value to be found in feedback of any sort, once we get past the knee-jerk "oh holy SHIT" reactions. *g*
Yes, please! And I'm SO SORRY.
Um, why? Real life gets in the way. Pretty boys to relieve the stresses of real life should get in the way. I know if I needed Feedback! Now! because this was about to go out on submission, I know you'd get it to me.
No worries. ::pets and gropes Amy::
Lee - Oct 05, 2008 11:43:34 am PDT #963 of 6687
The feeling you get when your brain finally lets your heart get in its pants.
The closer drabble is now closed.
The new prompt is push
erikaj - Oct 08, 2008 10:57:57 am PDT #964 of 6687
Always Anti-fascist!
Ok, so I'm writing a scene in an 1930's bank building that has been converted to chi-chi condos. I thought up this whole listening-at-the-door thing, but now that I think about it, older buildings probably wouldn't let the sound out the way, say, mine, does.Am I right?