Anya, the Shopkeepers of America called. They wanted me to tell you that 'please go' just got replaced with 'have a nice day.'

Xander ,'Selfless'


The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Barb - Sep 20, 2008 8:14:03 am PDT #909 of 6687
“Not dead yet!”

Would Organizer and Co-founder I think would probably cover all the bases without you needing to mention Nelson, and not be inaccurate, whereas I think if you refer to him as "founder" in the singular, you risk the argument that Senator Nelson was the one who originally brought him on board.


Ginger - Sep 20, 2008 8:23:43 am PDT #910 of 6687
"It didn't taste good. It tasted soooo horrible. It tasted like....a vodka martini." - Matilda

I don't see any reason not to use founder or "a founder."

What about "Hayes, an organizer of the first Earth Day" or "Hayes, national coordinator of the first Earth Day." It appears to be too complex to boil down into one word.


Typo Boy - Sep 20, 2008 10:19:51 am PDT #911 of 6687
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

Yeah, I think that will work. Thanks, Barb and Ginger.


Typo Boy - Sep 21, 2008 5:15:26 am PDT #912 of 6687
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

I have a book proposal I'm ready to send to an agent. Anybody willing to looking it over? My profile addy is good. Thanks.


Ginger - Sep 21, 2008 6:22:31 am PDT #913 of 6687
"It didn't taste good. It tasted soooo horrible. It tasted like....a vodka martini." - Matilda

You don't seem to have a profile address, TB.

I'd like to look your proposal over for you. I'm working on one myself. Proposals are hard. Profile addy should work.


Typo Boy - Sep 21, 2008 7:02:40 am PDT #914 of 6687
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

Ginger - insent. Thanks for being willing to look at it. And thanks for the heads up. Don't know how my profile address got destroyed. Now corrected in case anyone else is interested in looking it over.


Amy - Sep 21, 2008 11:07:36 am PDT #915 of 6687
Because books.

Squeaking in under the wire, as usual.

"dive"

It’s not the kind of thing she does, but she lets Amelia drag her along anyway. “It’s Friday,” Amelia shouts over the band, pressed up against her in the crowd. A greasy haze of smoke hangs over the bar. “Loosen up.”

It’s nothing like the steamy warmth of the pool at the gym, the chlorine tang in her lungs when she slices through the water. It’s hot, sweat and the yeasty funk of beer all she can smell. But the music makes her move, and after a minute it feels good, sound pumping in her blood. She lets herself dive.

Apparently I am living in the past! Oops. So this is ... a week late. ::sheepish::


Lee - Sep 21, 2008 11:49:00 am PDT #916 of 6687
The feeling you get when your brain finally lets your heart get in its pants.

The previous challenge is now closed. So is the one before that.

This week, let's have a Photo Drabble

Photographs 1 through 5 are From the Look at me archives

Photograph 1

Photograph 2

Photograph 3

Photograph 4

Photograph 5

Photographs 6-10 are from various groups on Flickr.

Photograph 6

Photograph 7

Photograph 8

Photograph 9

Photograph 10

Please identify what photograph you are drabbling about.


Connie Neil - Sep 21, 2008 2:29:34 pm PDT #917 of 6687
brillig

[link] Photo 9

Mr. Parks dabbed at the sweat on his bald head. "Draw your curtains, Ruby. They're asking us to close the house."

I blinked at him, looked out at the people gathered around the box office, then reached for the cords that drew the velvet curtains that blocked the windows. The crowd yelled disapproval.

"How long will we be closed, Mr. Parks? Lola said--"

"It's nothing neither you nor Lola need worry about." He wiped his head again. There were spots of drying blood on his cuffs. "I'm sure it won't be long."


Connie Neil - Sep 21, 2008 2:41:24 pm PDT #918 of 6687
brillig

Photos 4 [link] and 5 [link]

They last saw Aunt Sadie in Miami, on the beach, moving fast. Something about a motor launch waiting, with the engine running.

They said she robbed that market in Jacksonville, but I didn't believe it. Someone tied up the clerk and pistolwhipped the manager, but Aunt Sadie? In her sensible suit and eyeglasses?

And what about Uncle Ralph? He came home from Florida alone, then moved to Kansas. Daddy whispered something about where the money for the new farm came from, but Mom shushed him.

I got a card from Sadie when I graduated high school, postmarked Costa Rica, but Mom took it away.