Zoe: So you two were kissin'? Book: Well. Isn't that... special?

'Our Mrs. Reynolds'


The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


SailAweigh - Sep 07, 2008 9:22:03 pm PDT #886 of 6681
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

I was silent, Bev, because I was trying not to snort pudding out my nose.


Beverly - Sep 07, 2008 9:35:21 pm PDT #887 of 6681
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

\\o/


SailAweigh - Sep 07, 2008 10:23:58 pm PDT #888 of 6681
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

Beggars Can't Be Choosers

After shifting the burger bag to one hand and another smile at her benefactor, she leaned down and picked up her tip jar. Turning left, she started towards the flop in a walk/jog. The scent of warm burgers was making her mouth water; she had to get back fast.

It took her 10 minutes. She'd stuffed the donated bag inside her coat to preserve its heat. Cold food was a beggar's lot, but she didn't like to think of herself as a beggar. Beggars didn't have obligations.

Inside, she broke a burger into pieces. Coaxed him over. "Dive in, pooch."


Beverly - Sep 08, 2008 6:11:07 am PDT #889 of 6681
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

Awww. Very sweet, Sail. How much do I love the penguin cookie jar drabbles? Thiiiiis much. And now she has a dog!


Allyson - Sep 08, 2008 8:23:06 am PDT #890 of 6681
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

Thumbs up on chapter three from 6 year old Ashley, but Renny is "too scary because he is mean to Sam."

There's apparently a recording of her comments that I can hear later.

Jilli the Bat makes an appearance in chapter 5, the goth bats of London.


Atropa - Sep 08, 2008 12:39:08 pm PDT #891 of 6681
The artist formerly associated with cupcakes.

Jilli the Bat makes an appearance in chapter 5, the goth bats of London.

!!!

ohmygoshreally! Allyson, you darling.


Barb - Sep 08, 2008 5:01:05 pm PDT #892 of 6681
“Not dead yet!”

Oh sweet jiminy Christmas-- chapter four of Between Here & Gone (AKA the sixties story) is finally done. It only took me since, oh, I dunno... MARCH. Talk about terror, that I'd never be able to finish this chapter and talk about frustration, that I knew what I wanted it to do and where I wanted to take it and simply couldn't seem to do it.

As silly as it might sound, I feel like I can actually breathe a little easier right now. Damn, but this story's a bitch.


Lee - Sep 14, 2008 10:40:55 am PDT #893 of 6681
The feeling you get when your brain finally lets your heart get in its pants.

The dive challenge is now closed.

The new challenge is blur.


Barb - Sep 15, 2008 9:41:29 am PDT #894 of 6681
“Not dead yet!”

Oh, rock ON. I just had a very productive writing morning. Plot point that came out of left field, but makes perfect, inevitable sense. At least, for right now.


erikaj - Sep 15, 2008 12:16:08 pm PDT #895 of 6681
Always Anti-fascist!

I don't think I've written anything really good since the computer virus. It sounds ridiculous, but I think it shook my confidence. Any suggestions?