Mal: Okay. She won't be winning any beauty contests anytime soon. But she is solid. Ship like this, be with ya 'til the day you die. Zoe: 'Cause it's a deathtrap.

'Out Of Gas'


The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


amych - Aug 16, 2008 10:48:15 am PDT #681 of 6681
Now let us crush something soft and watch it fountain blood. That is a girlish thing to want to do, yes?

The list of awards + tiny extra-flowery quote sounds like she's a bit of a special unique snowflake. Asking for more will only make her think you like it, but asking her to follow the guidelines may just make her realize that this whole business has something to do with communicating with other people. (Or at least, playing well with others.)


Deena - Aug 16, 2008 10:49:55 am PDT #682 of 6681
How are you me? You need to stop that. Only I can be me. ~Kara

Yeah, speculative fiction is full of snowflakes.


Laga - Aug 16, 2008 10:52:24 am PDT #683 of 6681
You should know I'm a big deal in the Resistance.

I find the present tense awkward to read but I slip into it more often than not when I practice freewriting. I wonder why that is.


Ginger - Aug 16, 2008 10:53:56 am PDT #684 of 6681
"It didn't taste good. It tasted soooo horrible. It tasted like....a vodka martini." - Matilda

I fear that writing in general is full of snowflakes, or flakes for short.

I am trying to write about myself for my website. I would rather be boiled in oil than write about how I'm such a special snowflake that you should pay me a lot of money to do work for you.


Barb - Aug 16, 2008 10:57:43 am PDT #685 of 6681
“Not dead yet!”

but I slip into it more often than not when I practice freewriting. I wonder why that is.

Maybe it's how you think or how you verbally tell stories?


Barb - Aug 16, 2008 10:58:51 am PDT #686 of 6681
“Not dead yet!”

Yeah, speculative fiction is full of snowflakes.

This made me snort Diet Coke up my nose.

I fear that writing in general is full of snowflakes, or flakes for short.

BWAH! Hey, I resemble that remark! *g*


Deena - Aug 16, 2008 10:59:36 am PDT #687 of 6681
How are you me? You need to stop that. Only I can be me. ~Kara

I find it easier to write first person than third, and I like stories written that way if they work.


Barb - Aug 16, 2008 11:02:31 am PDT #688 of 6681
“Not dead yet!”

I find it easier to write first person than third, and I like stories written that way if they work.

My preferred poison is First Person, past tense, but it's such a huge no-no in romance that I'm relearning how to write in Third, which I avoided for years because of all the academic training. My dialogue was great, but the narrative sounded like a damned textbook. Feh. With any luck, I've gotten better at that.


Deena - Aug 16, 2008 11:06:05 am PDT #689 of 6681
How are you me? You need to stop that. Only I can be me. ~Kara

I like first person past tense! I think you're right about the academic poison. My third person dialogue sucks ass.


Ginger - Aug 16, 2008 11:15:13 am PDT #690 of 6681
"It didn't taste good. It tasted soooo horrible. It tasted like....a vodka martini." - Matilda

First person in the continuing present drives me nuts.

"I am going to the door. The rats hiss. They are eating me. I am bleeding on this paper."