Come on out, River. The nice man wants to kidnap you.

Simon ,'Objects In Space'


The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Deena - Aug 16, 2008 10:59:36 am PDT #687 of 6681
How are you me? You need to stop that. Only I can be me. ~Kara

I find it easier to write first person than third, and I like stories written that way if they work.


Barb - Aug 16, 2008 11:02:31 am PDT #688 of 6681
“Not dead yet!”

I find it easier to write first person than third, and I like stories written that way if they work.

My preferred poison is First Person, past tense, but it's such a huge no-no in romance that I'm relearning how to write in Third, which I avoided for years because of all the academic training. My dialogue was great, but the narrative sounded like a damned textbook. Feh. With any luck, I've gotten better at that.


Deena - Aug 16, 2008 11:06:05 am PDT #689 of 6681
How are you me? You need to stop that. Only I can be me. ~Kara

I like first person past tense! I think you're right about the academic poison. My third person dialogue sucks ass.


Ginger - Aug 16, 2008 11:15:13 am PDT #690 of 6681
"It didn't taste good. It tasted soooo horrible. It tasted like....a vodka martini." - Matilda

First person in the continuing present drives me nuts.

"I am going to the door. The rats hiss. They are eating me. I am bleeding on this paper."


Burrell - Aug 16, 2008 11:18:19 am PDT #691 of 6681
Why did Darth Vader cross the road? To get to the Dark Side!

I can't figure out how to write in first person present, I mean I can't imagine the context in which it would make narrative sense.


javachik - Aug 16, 2008 11:20:06 am PDT #692 of 6681
Our wings are not tired.

Maybe in a mystery, Burrell? But then I don't read many mysteries so what the hell do I know?


Barb - Aug 16, 2008 11:42:32 am PDT #693 of 6681
“Not dead yet!”

It was a fairly common convention in chick lit when the genre was a hot commodity, probably a 50-40-10 split between first person past, first present, and third past.

I very rarely liked any books written in first present, to the point where even if the story sounded good, I rarely bought it. It was just too... I don't know, uncomfortable to read.


sumi - Aug 16, 2008 11:54:29 am PDT #694 of 6681
Art Crawl!!!

Oh, I bet that's a result of Bridget Jones' Diary.


Barb - Aug 16, 2008 11:59:44 am PDT #695 of 6681
“Not dead yet!”

Oh, I bet that's a result of Bridget Jones' Diary.

No doubt, but Helen Fielding actually wielded the POV with skill-- the journal format already gave it a sense of immediacy that the first, preset accented. However, she did mix it up with first, past, which kept the present from becoming overwhelming.

Plus it was a damned funny book.


SailAweigh - Aug 16, 2008 12:10:01 pm PDT #696 of 6681
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

I never did read that book. I may have to take a look at it, just to see if I have an opinion on first person present tense. I can't see it, personally.