Yes, you should do that more often!
Please...Wesley...why can't I stay?
Fred ,'A Hole in the World'
The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?
A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.
Laura - Jul 25, 2018 4:47:44 am PDT #6539 of 6681
Our wings are not tired.
Karl - Jul 28, 2018 2:59:37 pm PDT #6540 of 6681
I adore all you motherfuckers so much -- PMM.
I committed writing, on the death of a colleague who was not all one thing: [link]
It still feels pretty incoherent in my head. I hope it's less so on the screen/page.
-t - Jul 28, 2018 3:26:08 pm PDT #6541 of 6681
I am a woman of various inclinations and only some of the time are they to burn everything down in frustration
Seems clear to me, Karl. And truly compassionate.
Beverly - Jul 28, 2018 3:58:26 pm PDT #6542 of 6681
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.
Very clear. And more compassion than he extended, it seems.
hippocampus - Aug 11, 2018 1:51:07 pm PDT #6543 of 6681
not your mom's socks.
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Thanks Sparky - (hello friends, I should put this in the delurking thread. Sigh) - so many b.org hands in this new book. Thanks to Consuela and Kat, Javachik and Raq especially, with more to come.
Gudanov - Sep 12, 2018 4:55:10 pm PDT #6544 of 6681
Coding and Sleeping
It looks like the narrator for my audiobook might be able to start recording again after having to take a year break for medical issues. It might actually happen at some point.
erikaj - Nov 12, 2018 8:45:40 am PST #6545 of 6681
Always Anti-fascist!
Need some thoughts about how to give a sense of time passing in a short story where you have limited pages to work with. Because I paid "Masters' Review" for extra feedback(So far, I think the notes are helpful, in that this editor does seem to get what I'm after with the story, but he did say "This wouldn't happen in one afternoon."
erikaj - Jan 01, 2019 2:05:54 pm PST #6546 of 6681
Always Anti-fascist!
I put some fiction up on my blog.http://bohemiancrip.blogspot.com/2019/01/a-taste-of-twist.html
erikaj - Feb 18, 2019 12:30:20 pm PST #6547 of 6681
Always Anti-fascist!
Another new blog post. [link]
Topic!Cindy - Mar 17, 2019 3:14:48 pm PDT #6548 of 6681
What is even happening?
So, my youngest son has written a book -- a 120K word Sci-Fi novel.
He wants to pursue having it published and I don't know where to begin. I take it we should find an agent, etc. How do we do that?
In the meantime, I am beta-reading it. I don't want to edit him or rewrite it, and I think hearing some kinds of feedback from your mom can dampen the creative flame, which I definitely don't want to do.
I told him the first time through, I'm only going to read it to read the story, and if I notice a glaring error of some sort, I'll tell him.
I was thinking we can then talk about what kind of feedback he thinks he'll find helpful.
Can anyone suggest some beta reading guidelines? What kind of feedback (when I'm on subsequent read-throughs) do you think might be useful, without feeling like mom-criticism?