And the thing is, I like my evil like I like my men: evil. You know, straight up, black hat, tied to the train tracks, soon my electro-ray will destroy metropolis BAD.

Buffy ,'Sleeper'


The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Gudanov - Oct 14, 2013 5:36:12 am PDT #5856 of 6687
Coding and Sleeping

I finished Dragonfire and already have reworked the ending based on some feedback. It's at 62k which according to this agent is right in the sweet spot for MG fantasy.

Once I've gotten a round of revising done, I've got three kid beta readers lined up, with maybe another one or two. I should probably find at least one adult beta reader as well.

Meanwhile, COG is out of the queue and being looked at by my agent right now. Not sure when edits will be coming.

Lots of writing stuff going on right now.


hippocampus - Oct 14, 2013 5:50:10 am PDT #5857 of 6687
not your mom's socks.

Go Gud Go!


Polter-Cow - Oct 14, 2013 6:09:53 am PDT #5858 of 6687
What else besides ramen can you scoop? YOU CAN SCOOP THIS WORLD FROM DARKNESS!

Awesome, Gud!


Gudanov - Oct 24, 2013 6:43:00 am PDT #5859 of 6687
Coding and Sleeping

I'm a good ways through my first revision of Dragonfire, mostly hunting typos right now. I think the age range for it will be 10-13 whereas COG is 8-12.

I like revision. Not that initial draft isn't any fun, but there's always the possibility of plotting myself into a corner or getting writer's block while writing the rough draft. Once it's done, I know I've got a book and polishing is less stressful.


Amy - Oct 24, 2013 9:11:06 am PDT #5860 of 6687
Because books.

You're made of much sterner stuff than me, Gud. I hate revising.


Amy - Oct 28, 2013 8:31:29 am PDT #5861 of 6687
Because books.

This a fun thing for Halloween. If you're on Twitter, anyway.


-t - Oct 31, 2013 5:48:14 pm PDT #5862 of 6687
I am a woman of various inclinations and only some of the time are they to burn everything down in frustration

I think my nod to NaNoWriMo this year will be learning to use Scrivener and Index Card


Amy - Oct 31, 2013 5:48:53 pm PDT #5863 of 6687
Because books.

Shit, that's tomorrow, isn't it. Hmmm.


Typo Boy - Oct 31, 2013 5:49:23 pm PDT #5864 of 6687
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

My entry for #Hallowfic: Sold my soul to Satin. Silky silky high thread count Satin. Soon Satin will collect, and I will die, smothered in luxury.


Gudanov - Nov 05, 2013 4:18:33 am PST #5865 of 6687
Coding and Sleeping

I think my nod to NaNoWriMo this year will be learning to use Scrivener and Index Card

Well worth it, I've come to really like Scrivener.

Kid beta readers have been positive on Dragonfire so far. Adult beta readers have been positive too, but aren't deep into it. Maybe I won't have to do any major rewriting and the length is already good.

Anyone doing NaNoWriMo? It's a revising month for me, not a writing month.