Played with Kaylee. Sun came out, and I walked on my feet and heard with my ears. I ate the bits, the bits stayed down, and I work. I function like I'm a girl. I hate it because I know it'll go away. The sun goes dark and chaos has come again. Bits. Fluids. What am I?!

River ,'War Stories'


The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Liese S. - Mar 31, 2012 1:22:57 pm PDT #5255 of 6690
"Faded like the lilac, he thought."

Yay, Scrappy. I'm excited for you!


Burrell - Mar 31, 2012 7:54:21 pm PDT #5256 of 6690
Why did Darth Vader cross the road? To get to the Dark Side!

Go Scrappy!


Laura - Apr 01, 2012 3:41:43 am PDT #5257 of 6690
Our wings are not tired.

Go Liese and Scrappy! Forward motion ahoy!


hippocampus - Apr 01, 2012 3:49:42 am PDT #5258 of 6690
not your mom's socks.

That's excellent news, Scrappy! Looking forward to your wordcounts.

Liese - I think that's a great plan. Hope you get some great feedback.


erikaj - Apr 01, 2012 12:04:35 pm PDT #5259 of 6690
Always Anti-fascist!

Scrappy, good luck. Liese, hope feedback helps.


hippocampus - Apr 01, 2012 4:15:26 pm PDT #5260 of 6690
not your mom's socks.

Dear editors (who aren't on this board) feel free to love on my story at any time. Anyone who has some acceptance~ma to share, I'd welcome it.


Scrappy - Apr 02, 2012 12:27:06 pm PDT #5261 of 6690
Life moves pretty fast. You don't stop and look around once in a while, you could miss it.

A play is roughly 75-90 pages. I have completed four so far, but I am feeling pretty good. The biggest workof writing a play is not the page count, but actually figuring out how you are going to tell the story: Naturalistic? Actors playing more than one character? Monologues? How many settings? Poetic language? Break the fourth wall? yaddayaddayadda. I think I have that almost figured out, which should mean the writing goes smoothly.


Ginger - Apr 02, 2012 12:32:15 pm PDT #5262 of 6690
"It didn't taste good. It tasted soooo horrible. It tasted like....a vodka martini." - Matilda

Write, Scrappy, write. Plot, Scrappy, plot.


Amy - Apr 02, 2012 2:39:09 pm PDT #5263 of 6690
Because books.

Feedback ~ma to Liese and Sox.

Scrappy, what's the play about? Also, yay for mostly figuring it out.

I was just contacted by someone referred by a friend to edit her children's book, for ages 7 to 12 (she thinks). She also says it's "metaphysical". I really hope she means it's got something supernatural about it, because otherwise, eek.


Gudanov - Apr 02, 2012 5:51:04 pm PDT #5264 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping

Go Scrappy!

Much acceptance~ma Sox!