I'm drawn most to #3, probably thanks to my love of all things 1930s. Also, it could be pitched as a YA take on Carnivale.
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Anne W. - Nov 14, 2011 6:48:55 am PST #4859 of 6693
The lost sheep grow teeth, forsake their lambs, and lie with the lions.
sj - Nov 14, 2011 7:05:11 am PST #4860 of 6693
"There are few hours in life more agreeable than the hour dedicated to the ceremony known as afternoon tea."
I like 3 the best. 2 sounds good as well. I don't really like 1.
amyth - Nov 14, 2011 7:07:34 am PST #4861 of 6693
And none of us deserving the cruelty or the grace -- Leonard Cohen
Yes, I really like #3.
Strix - Nov 14, 2011 7:09:16 am PST #4862 of 6693
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger
3 for me! Carnivale meets the Night Circus meets Amy Garvey -- yum!
Liese S. - Nov 14, 2011 7:09:21 am PST #4863 of 6693
"Faded like the lilac, he thought."
Me too! I like 3 a lot!
Amy - Nov 14, 2011 7:13:59 am PST #4864 of 6693
Because books.
So #3 is taking the crown, huh? (That's the one I think I like best, too.) So that's the one I'll play with this week!
sj, tell me what you didn't like about #1, just out of curiosity?
Allyson - Nov 14, 2011 7:28:45 am PST #4865 of 6693
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica
Totally 3. It sounds so wicked and smells like funnel cake and doom.
sj - Nov 14, 2011 7:29:09 am PST #4866 of 6693
"There are few hours in life more agreeable than the hour dedicated to the ceremony known as afternoon tea."
sj, tell me what you didn't like about #1, just out of curiosity?
It just seems like something that has been done before, at least the bored muse part. Sorry.
Amy - Nov 14, 2011 7:29:30 am PST #4867 of 6693
Because books.
It sounds so wicked and smells like funnel cake and doom.
Dude. There's the cover copy RIGHT THERE!
Amy - Nov 14, 2011 7:30:02 am PST #4868 of 6693
Because books.
It just seems like something that has been done before, at least the bored muse part. Sorry.
No need to apologize! That's what I need to know!