I'd be happy to take a look and give my unqualified opinions.
You're wrong about River. River's not on the ship. They didn't want her here, but she couldn't make herself leave. So she melted... Melted away. They didn't know she could do that, but she did.
River ,'Objects In Space'
The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?
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Gudanov - Aug 07, 2011 4:50:36 pm PDT #4563 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping
Strix - Aug 07, 2011 5:19:10 pm PDT #4564 of 6690
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger
Sure, Gud! Thanks, and insending.
ETA: Hey, WTF? Why can't I see peep's profile addy's any more?
e-me at owltlet AT gmail DOT com.
§ ita § - Aug 08, 2011 5:05:32 am PDT #4565 of 6690
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.
Hey, WTF? Why can't I see peep's profile addy's any more?
Are you sure they are displaying it?
Strix - Aug 08, 2011 6:36:04 am PDT #4566 of 6690
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger
Hmm. I poked around, ita, and you're right. As usual.
It's just coincidence that the last three people I looked for profile addy's didn't have one, and I assumed I tweaked my CSS wrong.
ASSUMPTIONS. PFFT.
Gudanov - Aug 09, 2011 4:53:39 am PDT #4567 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping
Oops. My profile addy was turned off. I thought it was on for some reason.
I'm getting close to finishing my revision of chapter 2 (chapters 2 and 3 of the rough draft). Not that anything is really locked down at the moment, just working through the changes I already know I want to make and fixing various things.
hippocampus - Aug 09, 2011 11:51:55 am PDT #4568 of 6690
not your mom's socks.
AUGH how is it that revision is actually weakening this story. That's not supposed to happen.
Gudanov - Aug 09, 2011 5:13:55 pm PDT #4569 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping
Maybe it'll be like setting a bone, painful at first but necessary to heal.
Nice essay, Erin. I only made a couple of notes, but I really liked the metaphor.
Strix - Aug 10, 2011 7:30:47 am PDT #4570 of 6690
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger
Thanks, Gud! I've tweaked it,and written the query letter (my first query to a magazine! WOO!) and will be sending it out today.
Gudanov - Aug 10, 2011 9:29:13 am PDT #4571 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping
Good Luck!
One of these days I need to revise my short story 'Adventures of Lloyd' and submit it someplace. It's a parody of fantasy stories so I'd need to find a welcome market for that sort of thing. Meanwhile, I made it through chapter 2 and I'm working on revising chapter 3.
Strix - Aug 10, 2011 7:27:52 pm PDT #4572 of 6690
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger
I sent the query and submission out this evening!
Gud, I'll keep an eye out for possible markets for your story.
Thanks for your feedback!