Wesley: I stabbed you. I should apologize for that. But I'm honestly not sure how. I think it'll just be awkward. Gunn: Good call. Wesley: Okay.

'Time Bomb'


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Gudanov - Aug 10, 2011 9:29:13 am PDT #4571 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping

Good Luck!

One of these days I need to revise my short story 'Adventures of Lloyd' and submit it someplace. It's a parody of fantasy stories so I'd need to find a welcome market for that sort of thing. Meanwhile, I made it through chapter 2 and I'm working on revising chapter 3.


Strix - Aug 10, 2011 7:27:52 pm PDT #4572 of 6690
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger

I sent the query and submission out this evening!

Gud, I'll keep an eye out for possible markets for your story.

Thanks for your feedback!


Typo Boy - Aug 13, 2011 3:10:20 pm PDT #4573 of 6690
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

Personal whine, whine, whine. My old editor resigned. My new editor wants changes. On the bright side he is willing to tell me what he wants changed rather than editing a representative sample and saying "edit the rest that way".


Amy - Aug 13, 2011 3:28:20 pm PDT #4574 of 6690
Because books.

If you were through with revisions, why is he asking for more? Weren't you at or close to the copyediting stage?


Typo Boy - Aug 13, 2011 3:37:04 pm PDT #4575 of 6690
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

I did the revisions the old editor wanted. He wants more. I'm pushing back a bit - explaining that some of what he dislikes about the structure was a selling point for the book in the original proposal. The problem is that it is not his proposal, and he did not buy into the vision. Tuesday there will be a discussion to find out exactly what he wants. But he already agreed that if we come to a meeting of minds on changes, he will then detail exactly what paragraphs he wants changed. And if the changes end up at the paragraph level I can live with that. But what I can't live with is structural changes. He took over another editor's project at a very late stage. He needs to live with what the previous editor and the author agreed to as a general strategy and vision.

I know some provisions I will definitely negotiate for in future contracts. An agent could helped there, but apparently it is harder to get an agent than to get published.


Gudanov - Aug 15, 2011 5:21:20 pm PDT #4576 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping

I had another novel idea smack me in the head. I'm starting to get a stack big enough that I might have to start giving up on some of them.


Connie Neil - Aug 15, 2011 7:21:05 pm PDT #4577 of 6690
brillig

I might have to start giving up on some of them.

Now you understand writing. So many idea, so many terrific characters, so few opportunities to have an independent fortune that leads to a life of leisure fall into your lap.


Toddson - Aug 16, 2011 6:11:56 am PDT #4578 of 6690
Friends don't let friends read "Atlas Shrugged"

Or, Gud, you could write down the ideas and file them away in case inspiration fails.

Me, I've come to hate the writing I do for my job. It's a major slog to get through it. Kind of like the proverbial writer's block with a topping of "don't wanna".


Gudanov - Aug 16, 2011 6:57:21 am PDT #4579 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping

I've got some characters and a rough plot for the new idea which I think will be the next new book. My daughter isn't very interested in reading Cog since it's "too mechanical" and she's never much liked that the main character is named "Cog". My son read the rough draft and liked it, though.

The new idea is much more traditional fantasy and really targeted toward her interests, so I'm hoping I can get her involved in helping with getting some details right. I don't think it'll be especially marketable, but that's not really the point of it.

I've written an opening and have some notes for one of the other novel ideas which is the one that will probably slide. And I've written an outline, an opening chapter, and have a short story related to the other novel idea.

So creating notes is covered.


hippocampus - Aug 16, 2011 7:07:40 am PDT #4580 of 6690
not your mom's socks.

Gud, do you want to send me revised chapters?

Also, yay new ideas!