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The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Barb - Apr 07, 2011 10:58:15 am PDT #4269 of 6690
“Not dead yet!”

So an editor is interested in the ghost YA but had some suggestions. She talked to my agent yesterday who then passed on the suggestions to me and we talked it out. Now, normally, I'm all "hell, no" about making changes without a contract in place because I've been burned monumentally in the past, however--

These were only suggestions for some cuts on the partial and I'm not so invested in this story that the idea of rearranging things and killing darlings was sending me rushing for the smelling salts. So after I got off the phone with Lovely Agent, I set to work, chopped 2 chapters wholesale, trimmed some fat from other chapters, rearranged the living HELL out of what was there (Chapter 1 is now Chapter 5) and turned it back into my agent less than two hours after our conversation.

Fear me.

(Whether or not it's exactly what the editor was thinking, who knows, but my being able to turn something around so quickly should bode well.)


Seska (the Watcher-in-Training) - Apr 07, 2011 11:12:35 am PDT #4270 of 6690
"We're all stories, in the end. Just make it a good one, eh?"

I feel like I should go back to Scrivener and figure out how to use it, since so many folks seem to swear by it

I'm just starting to learn to use it, and it's really making a difference. I need to decide whether to move my stuff over from Excel and places. Excel works totally differently from the way my brain does, so it could be worth the effort.

Fear me.

Ooh. I do.


Barb - Apr 07, 2011 11:25:18 am PDT #4271 of 6690
“Not dead yet!”

Seska, I gave Scrivener another try and said, sod it-- I just couldn't get behind it, but then I found Story Mill which has some similar attributes to Scrivener, but for me is far more intuitive.

Just an FYI.


Seska (the Watcher-in-Training) - Apr 07, 2011 11:42:19 am PDT #4272 of 6690
"We're all stories, in the end. Just make it a good one, eh?"

That looks really interesting, Barb, but I can't see a Windows version, or I'd try it out. I'm using the Windows beta of Scrivener.


Barb - Apr 07, 2011 12:04:24 pm PDT #4273 of 6690
“Not dead yet!”

Crud-- I wasn't sure if it was a Mac-only app. Pity, because it really is rocking.


hippocampus - Apr 07, 2011 3:02:45 pm PDT #4274 of 6690
not your mom's socks.

Barb, I just tweeted your way, if you're wondering who that is with the salt chocolate caramels.


Barb - Apr 07, 2011 3:07:21 pm PDT #4275 of 6690
“Not dead yet!”

Hee! I knew it was you. And now I want some!


hippocampus - Apr 07, 2011 3:08:16 pm PDT #4276 of 6690
not your mom's socks.

yeah, that's me, leaving a trail of salt chocolates throughout the interwebs.


Volans - Apr 07, 2011 3:10:52 pm PDT #4277 of 6690
move out and draw fire

Tauntypants.


hippocampus - Apr 07, 2011 3:11:43 pm PDT #4278 of 6690
not your mom's socks.

better than easter eggs.