These girls have the most beautiful dresses. And so do I -- how about that?

Kaylee ,'Shindig'


The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Gudanov - Mar 28, 2011 8:39:20 am PDT #4228 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping

I have a new short story 'The Adventures of Lloyd' written for a contest. It's supposed to be a parody of a fantasy-fiction cliche. Or cliches as the case is here. There's a bit of swearing in there.

[link]

Password is 'foamy'. I have e-reader versions there as well.


Gudanov - Mar 28, 2011 8:44:48 am PDT #4229 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping

I don't know if I'll do something with it or not, hence the password protected page. I'm not sure there's a short-story market for a parody of this type.


hippocampus - Mar 29, 2011 4:02:41 am PDT #4230 of 6690
not your mom's socks.

That first story I submitted bounced back. I'm going to put it through an edit and send it somewhere else before I get too maudlin about it. I have another story out, and two getting close to heading that direction. Hoping something will make it past a slush pile sooner rather than later.


Gudanov - Mar 29, 2011 5:48:25 am PDT #4231 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping

Hang in there Sox.

My short story won't likely be bounced for quite awhile. There's a long wait time where I sent it.

I'll admit I haven't been sending out queries on the novel. I'm not wanting to take the time to tweak up a new query letter when I'm rolling along so well on my current draft of Cog. I'm at 30,000 words and I'll be using the term 'steam-power gatling snow-cannon' at the end of the chapter I'm working on.


Amy - Mar 29, 2011 6:01:53 am PDT #4232 of 6690
Because books.

What Gud said, Sox. Send it off to the next name on the list.

Gud, it's excellent you're having so much fun with the new book.

Book ~ma, Barb!


Barb - Mar 29, 2011 6:24:02 am PDT #4233 of 6690
“Not dead yet!”

Oh Sox-- at least it's just the first one. Like Gud and Amy said, send it off to the next one on the list. Lots of ~ma.

Yay on the new book, Gud!

And thanks for the ~ma. I'm trying not to stress and distracting myself by working on Dorian, which I'll admit, is ridiculously fun, to allow myself to go a good bit darker than I have in the past. I told another friend how much I was enjoying playing with some really dark stuff and her reply was, "You aren't really surprised by that, are you? You always, always go dark with your women's fic and it's what gets you in trouble because you tend to cross the lines."

So I'm a slow learner.


hippocampus - Mar 29, 2011 7:40:25 am PDT #4234 of 6690
not your mom's socks.

book!~ma Barb!

Thanks guys - I'm going to turn it right around, after an edit.


sj - Mar 29, 2011 7:53:29 am PDT #4235 of 6690
"There are few hours in life more agreeable than the hour dedicated to the ceremony known as afternoon tea."

book~ma, Barb!


hippocampus - Mar 29, 2011 1:27:49 pm PDT #4236 of 6690
not your mom's socks.

ok my chin didn't do the greatest job staying up, so I'm switching to wine.


Liese S. - Mar 30, 2011 7:50:59 am PDT #4237 of 6690
"Faded like the lilac, he thought."

Today I got word back that I didn't win the songwriting contest I'd entered months ago. Woes. But I entered it because every entry gets feedback, which I should get in the mail next month, so I'm trying to remember the contest itself was a longshot, and the goal was the feedback. Of course, if the feedback comes back entirely negative or a brushoff, then I shall lie on the floor and bemoan my fate.