Thanks. I've got one sentence down at least.

I'll thread bomb a little.

I'm not sure fate is quite accurate since there really isn't some big predestiny thing going (there's a prophecy but it turns out to just be a misinterpretation of the text and has no validity whatsoever) but I think it's close enough.

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I've discovered that there are enough unintentionally funny moments in Twilight to give at least some entertainment value on my commute. I sort of love that Bella apparently has an actual supernatural ability to be in danger. At first I thought this was just the characters joking in dialogue, but no, it isn't a joke. I have to admit the book is bad in more bizarre ways that I thought it would be. I find myself very curious as to when a plot shows up, not really yet, but I'm only ten chapters in.

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I'll throw out the link my draft of chapter 1 of the new novel 'Shore of Night' if anyone wants to take a peek/kill off a few minutes.

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First draft of global warming book finished. 92,000 words. Contracted word limit 85,000 words. Will edit and get to beta's and editor as soon as possible.

I think fixes for overage is fairly straightforwards

1) I tend to write long and become more succinct in editing. So just editing for quality without worrying about word length should help.

2) Some of the appendixes have hot air that should be removed just as a matter of quality so again that should shrink.

3) Once stuff is out to editor and betas, the citations are a mess in formating. Straightening that out should get rid of extra verbiage.

4) I'll see what fixes done is response to editor and beta notes do to word length.

If by the end of that four step process the manuscript has not shrunk to 85,000 words as side effect of quality improvement then I'll worry about specific efforts to shorten.

Typo, I meant to say earlier that I think I can beta, particularly if it's something I can do while escaping my family at Christmas. I wouldn't be the average reader, since it's in my area of expertise, but I might be helpful.

eta: One of my skills as an editor is finding shorter ways to say things, so if it turns out you need to shorten, I can probably help. (I'm much better at shortening other people's stuff than my own.)

Terrific! Thanks very much. I'll definitely send you a copy as soon as I've made a couple of self-editing passes. Not guaranteeing Xmas.

Excellent Typo.

I've made another pass over chapters 1 - 2 and soon over 3. I also have a synopsis that I need to do more reviewing of. The first round of submitting should be the beginning of the year.

I also downloaded my short story off of iBooks last night. It's fun to be in Apple's online book store even if it isn't an accomplishment.

So I seem to have written a novel. Or the first draft of one, anyway. I'm a little startled that I managed to finish the thing; I am not so great with the follow-through usually.

Go you, Holli!

I'm enjoying the stories you linked for download the other day, by the way. Well, I've just read the first one thus far, but I quite liked it and am looking forward to the rest

Oh, I'm glad you like it! Those stories were kind of my warm-up for finishing the novel.

Yay, Holli!