Anya: It's lovely! I wish it was mine! Oh like you weren't all thinking the same thing. Giles: I'm fairly certain I wasn't.

'The Killer In Me'


The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Ginger - Dec 21, 2010 1:40:21 pm PST #3787 of 6692
"It didn't taste good. It tasted soooo horrible. It tasted like....a vodka martini." - Matilda

Typo, I meant to say earlier that I think I can beta, particularly if it's something I can do while escaping my family at Christmas. I wouldn't be the average reader, since it's in my area of expertise, but I might be helpful.

eta: One of my skills as an editor is finding shorter ways to say things, so if it turns out you need to shorten, I can probably help. (I'm much better at shortening other people's stuff than my own.)


Typo Boy - Dec 21, 2010 1:47:01 pm PST #3788 of 6692
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

Terrific! Thanks very much. I'll definitely send you a copy as soon as I've made a couple of self-editing passes. Not guaranteeing Xmas.


Gudanov - Dec 22, 2010 5:07:21 am PST #3789 of 6692
Coding and Sleeping

Excellent Typo.

I've made another pass over chapters 1 - 2 and soon over 3. I also have a synopsis that I need to do more reviewing of. The first round of submitting should be the beginning of the year.

I also downloaded my short story off of iBooks last night. It's fun to be in Apple's online book store even if it isn't an accomplishment.


Holli - Dec 23, 2010 4:57:25 pm PST #3790 of 6692
an overblown libretto and a sumptuous score/ could never contain the contradictions I adore

So I seem to have written a novel. Or the first draft of one, anyway. I'm a little startled that I managed to finish the thing; I am not so great with the follow-through usually.


-t - Dec 23, 2010 5:07:50 pm PST #3791 of 6692
I am a woman of various inclinations and only some of the time are they to burn everything down in frustration

Go you, Holli!

I'm enjoying the stories you linked for download the other day, by the way. Well, I've just read the first one thus far, but I quite liked it and am looking forward to the rest


Holli - Dec 23, 2010 5:16:41 pm PST #3792 of 6692
an overblown libretto and a sumptuous score/ could never contain the contradictions I adore

Oh, I'm glad you like it! Those stories were kind of my warm-up for finishing the novel.


sj - Dec 23, 2010 6:49:30 pm PST #3793 of 6692
"There are few hours in life more agreeable than the hour dedicated to the ceremony known as afternoon tea."

Yay, Holli!


Barb - Dec 24, 2010 6:56:56 am PST #3794 of 6692
“Not dead yet!”

Congrats, Holli! In finishing, you've just done what 99.9% of the people who say they're going to write a novel never actually manage to do! Well done!


Gudanov - Dec 27, 2010 5:52:18 am PST #3795 of 6692
Coding and Sleeping

Congrats Holli!

It looks like next week I'll be sending out my first queries. It's just about game time.


Gudanov - Dec 27, 2010 8:47:23 am PST #3796 of 6692
Coding and Sleeping

Bother, the Sony Reader Store has my short story up, but they've got an author bio for a different person. No, I'm not the person who wrote "Thunderstruck" and "Devil in the White City". Cripes. The pitfalls of using your actual name.