You want to read what I have so far, just for general impressions?
Sure, send away.
Jayne: We was just about to spring into action, Captain. Complicated escape and rescue op. Wash: I was going to watch. It was very exciting.
'Shindig'
The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?
A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.
Barb - Mar 26, 2010 10:47:02 am PDT #3195 of 6693
“Not dead yet!”
Gudanov - Mar 29, 2010 5:52:00 am PDT #3196 of 6693
Coding and Sleeping
Who has two thumbs and a completed revision?
Okay, I still have a little clean-up and read-through to do on the final chapters and the epilogue, but the rewriting is done for this round.
Now for editing, chopping, some new scenes in places, adverb killing, and other fun things.
-t - Mar 29, 2010 7:07:39 am PDT #3197 of 6693
I am a woman of various inclinations and only some of the time are they to burn everything down in frustration
Way to go, Gudanov!
Gudanov - Mar 29, 2010 9:14:53 am PDT #3198 of 6693
Coding and Sleeping
Thanks. It's exciting to get past another step.
Seska (the Watcher-in-Training) - Mar 29, 2010 12:12:20 pm PDT #3199 of 6693
"We're all stories, in the end. Just make it a good one, eh?"
Nice one, Gudanov.
Gudanov - Mar 29, 2010 12:52:12 pm PDT #3200 of 6693
Coding and Sleeping
The one big downer is the size, 154k. It's a bit long for one book and a bit short for two. I think I'm going to try for one book again. Between chopping and tightening maybe I can whack 40k then figure another 10k of scenes to replace some of the chopped sections. It'll be tough, but I figure it'll be better to shrink toward a target than expand toward a target.
erikaj - Mar 29, 2010 1:19:57 pm PDT #3201 of 6693
Always Anti-fascist!
Anybody want to help me get my script to 30 pages? Of course, I should probably write it out all the way... Why must I always write so long?
Gudanov - Mar 30, 2010 5:36:22 am PDT #3202 of 6693
Coding and Sleeping
I got through two chapters of clean-up. I've got three more chapters and an epilogue before I can call this revision truly done.
I've been listening to a new audiobook lately, and OMG, the number of '...Dude said [adverb]' attributions is insane, they're everywhere. Not doing that is like rule one of attributions. Writing has definitely changed by sensitivity to such things while reading.
Gudanov - Mar 31, 2010 4:20:40 am PDT #3203 of 6693
Coding and Sleeping
It's official. I'm done with the revision 1 file. From now on I'll be working on the revision 2 file.
Another milestone down.
Gudanov - Mar 31, 2010 6:03:48 am PDT #3204 of 6693
Coding and Sleeping
Liese, did you want me to send book two? If so when? It's 170k compressed.