Right. Sir. Honey.

Zoe ,'The Train Job'


The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


-t - Mar 08, 2010 7:07:54 am PST #3138 of 6693
I am a woman of various inclinations and only some of the time are they to burn everything down in frustration

Normal is fine.


Gudanov - Mar 08, 2010 7:16:59 am PST #3139 of 6693
Coding and Sleeping

The normal one I have laying around, so to speak, so I can just send it.

Again, Thanks!


erikaj - Mar 08, 2010 10:03:10 am PST #3140 of 6693
Always Anti-fascist!

Ok, so I thought signing up for Script Frenzy, which is like NaNO for Screenwriters would be an awesome idea, because it would force me to finish my spec by 4/1 and for the challenge and all that happy crap, right? But I forgot how "!!!!" writing hobbyists are.Everything is just always*so* much fun and the best shit evar...I don't remember when I started a writing project and felt like that, but I think my age had "teen" in it. I don't suppose there's a nice way to post back "Please stop gushing...your ceaseless glee is making me sick." And I don't even think I'm even all that tormented...not one of those people that believes every page is childbirth(despite my tripping on what a big job the spec has been....the new version has come more easily But there are definite moments of pleasure in a well-crafted, in character moment...it's just hard to imagine being all "Woo hoo!" about it...at this point that would feel like being excited about...digesting a sandwich.


Gudanov - Mar 09, 2010 5:51:33 am PST #3141 of 6693
Coding and Sleeping

57 is done with now, and I'm making inroads into 58. After spending forever on chapter 55, I'm feeling good about making progress now.


Gudanov - Mar 09, 2010 9:43:01 am PST #3142 of 6693
Coding and Sleeping

My new audiobook is Killing Floor, by Lee Child. It was recommended to me, partly to see how he depicts characters. Well, I'm writing fantasy and this is a crime drama, so it doesn't help much. The main character is a detective and portrayed in first person, so while the characters are sharply drawn, its mostly by the main character telling you what they are like from observations. It's totally in character, but it's not an approach that works for me.

As for the book itself, I'm enjoying it when the plot is progressing, but there are spots where I feel like he strolls away from the plot to describe stuff and account for time. So good, but I think the editing could be more ruthless. The paperback has 544 pages so about 180,000 words, seems like some trimming wouldn't be bad.


Ginger - Mar 09, 2010 10:35:37 am PST #3143 of 6693
"It didn't taste good. It tasted soooo horrible. It tasted like....a vodka martini." - Matilda

Do not get me started on his depiction of Georgia or the dramatic scene in the airport that could not possibly have taken place in any incarnation of the Atlanta airport.


Gudanov - Mar 09, 2010 10:50:36 am PST #3144 of 6693
Coding and Sleeping

I'm not that far into it yet, it's a pretty sizable book. There is a certain stereotype feel to, well, everything, but I like the way the mystery is being set up when he doesn't wander off.

From everything I've read, a first book this long would be impossible to get picked up, but if I had a dime for every "don't do this" thing I see in published work, I'd have a lot of dimes.


erikaj - Mar 09, 2010 10:53:34 am PST #3145 of 6693
Always Anti-fascist!

Yeah.


askye - Mar 09, 2010 4:13:06 pm PST #3146 of 6693
Thrive to spite them

I like the books, but yeah, the author should have researched small town Georgia before writing it.

I've read a bunch of his others and I can't say if he made the same mistakes but the plots are fairly tight and it keeps my interest.


Gudanov - Mar 10, 2010 5:47:05 am PST #3147 of 6693
Coding and Sleeping

I'm progressing through chapter 58, and trying not to let things slow down too much.

I have a title for the second book now if I split it into two (chapters 1-34 and chapters 35-62).