Um, well, we listened to aggressively cheerful music sung by people chosen for their ability to dance. Then we ate cookie dough, and talked about boys.

Giles ,'Get It Done'


The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Gudanov - Feb 19, 2010 9:43:10 am PST #3092 of 6705
Coding and Sleeping

You need to shake it more like a magic 8-ball.

Good luck!


Liese S. - Feb 19, 2010 2:57:54 pm PST #3093 of 6705
"Faded like the lilac, he thought."

YUP! I have data limitations, so it`d be best if I could get the file after the 23rd, but I`d be happy to.


Gudanov - Feb 19, 2010 3:42:21 pm PST #3094 of 6705
Coding and Sleeping

Thanks!

I'll make sure to zip it up before I send.


Gudanov - Feb 22, 2010 5:40:45 am PST #3095 of 6705
Coding and Sleeping

I working slowly on 55. Taxes got in the way this weekend, but at least they are all done.

I got a chapter back from Beta Exchange person two. One of the comments is that it all (the manuscript) reads more like an outline than a draft. I'm a bit like, it's not good enough even to be a draft? Maybe it just means there are too many places where scenes could replace narrative, that doesn't seem unusual for a draft.


Gudanov - Feb 22, 2010 8:04:57 am PST #3096 of 6705
Coding and Sleeping

I just got an e-mail asking for my opinion on a query. I'd like to help, but I'm not to the point where I've even researched how to write one. I think I'll just have to say, sorry, but I can't give you anything useful.


Gudanov - Feb 23, 2010 5:24:05 am PST #3097 of 6705
Coding and Sleeping

No progress yesterday, I worked until 9:30pm and by the time I got home, had dinner, and fixed the VOIP adapter; there was no time left. Well, I wrote a couple of sentences after checking my e-mail.

I gave a shot at feedback on the query letter, but I made the caveat that I'm not the right person to ask. Guess I couldn't help giving my opinion.

Beta Exchange person one sent me an e-mail, maybe that'll start up again.

I haven't forgotten about you erika, I've been very pressed for time with work and other things like taxes. When I start getting time again, I'll be looking at it.


erikaj - Feb 23, 2010 12:19:12 pm PST #3098 of 6705
Always Anti-fascist!

It's all right, not like anyone is waiting on it.


Gudanov - Feb 24, 2010 5:20:01 am PST #3099 of 6705
Coding and Sleeping

I actually made some progress on 55. Not working late really helps.


Gudanov - Feb 24, 2010 5:31:13 am PST #3100 of 6705
Coding and Sleeping

174,000 bytes of compressed draft-quality fiction is headed your way, Liese. Thanks.


Liese S. - Feb 24, 2010 11:06:34 am PST #3101 of 6705
"Faded like the lilac, he thought."

Whohoo! Got it. And will be reading!