Can't drink, smoke, diddle my willy. Doesn't leave much to do other than watch you blokes stumble around playing Agatha Christie.

Spike ,'The Cautionary Tale of Numero Cinco'


The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Gudanov - Feb 22, 2010 5:40:45 am PST #3095 of 6706
Coding and Sleeping

I working slowly on 55. Taxes got in the way this weekend, but at least they are all done.

I got a chapter back from Beta Exchange person two. One of the comments is that it all (the manuscript) reads more like an outline than a draft. I'm a bit like, it's not good enough even to be a draft? Maybe it just means there are too many places where scenes could replace narrative, that doesn't seem unusual for a draft.


Gudanov - Feb 22, 2010 8:04:57 am PST #3096 of 6706
Coding and Sleeping

I just got an e-mail asking for my opinion on a query. I'd like to help, but I'm not to the point where I've even researched how to write one. I think I'll just have to say, sorry, but I can't give you anything useful.


Gudanov - Feb 23, 2010 5:24:05 am PST #3097 of 6706
Coding and Sleeping

No progress yesterday, I worked until 9:30pm and by the time I got home, had dinner, and fixed the VOIP adapter; there was no time left. Well, I wrote a couple of sentences after checking my e-mail.

I gave a shot at feedback on the query letter, but I made the caveat that I'm not the right person to ask. Guess I couldn't help giving my opinion.

Beta Exchange person one sent me an e-mail, maybe that'll start up again.

I haven't forgotten about you erika, I've been very pressed for time with work and other things like taxes. When I start getting time again, I'll be looking at it.


erikaj - Feb 23, 2010 12:19:12 pm PST #3098 of 6706
Always Anti-fascist!

It's all right, not like anyone is waiting on it.


Gudanov - Feb 24, 2010 5:20:01 am PST #3099 of 6706
Coding and Sleeping

I actually made some progress on 55. Not working late really helps.


Gudanov - Feb 24, 2010 5:31:13 am PST #3100 of 6706
Coding and Sleeping

174,000 bytes of compressed draft-quality fiction is headed your way, Liese. Thanks.


Liese S. - Feb 24, 2010 11:06:34 am PST #3101 of 6706
"Faded like the lilac, he thought."

Whohoo! Got it. And will be reading!


Gudanov - Feb 24, 2010 12:51:47 pm PST #3102 of 6706
Coding and Sleeping

Thanks for letting me inflict my writing on you!


Gudanov - Feb 25, 2010 6:09:26 am PST #3103 of 6706
Coding and Sleeping

Very little progress. A combination of working late and spending too much time examining my car stereo's wiring diagram.


Amy - Feb 25, 2010 10:03:28 am PST #3104 of 6706
Because books.

Via Twitter:

FakeAPStylebook When considering whether to write in dialect, please don't.

Man, I love whoever is behind that. They got a book deal, too!