Chapters 1-34 are 78k so that would make it very viable with a strengthened Savin storyline. I could land that at 100k. I may have to go big.
Very convincing. Makes me completely want to put myself under government control. Please take me to where you can make me unconscious and naked.
Riley ,'Help'
The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?
A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.
Gudanov - Feb 16, 2010 6:51:32 am PST #3072 of 6732
Coding and Sleeping
Gudanov - Feb 16, 2010 6:52:10 am PST #3073 of 6732
Coding and Sleeping
My offer is still open as well. I just can't be quick at the moment.
erikaj - Feb 16, 2010 6:58:34 am PST #3074 of 6732
"already on the kiss-cam with Karl Marx"-
Ok, being that the show is so dudely, it couldn't hurt to have some guys read it...insent, shortly. Thanks. (I did decide to pay for the notes...I'll get it back if I ever write the next Big Fat Greek Bitch, right?)
Amy - Feb 16, 2010 7:14:03 am PST #3075 of 6732
Because books.
Who did you pay, erika? Because if it's not an editor or someone with a lot of actual publishing experience, I really wouldn't pay for that next time around.
erikaj - Feb 16, 2010 8:24:24 am PST #3076 of 6732
"already on the kiss-cam with Karl Marx"-
He says that he used to read scripts for a studio...he has a screenwriting website...I know, any asshole can have a website, I have one too, but people actually read his. Ah, well, it was the old man's money...we'll see how good his feedback is.
Allyson - Feb 16, 2010 12:41:09 pm PST #3077 of 6732
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica
Five more rejection letters today. Sam is too sweet, too earnest, too weak, has no flair, and basically I suck.
I hate the hurty parts.
Amy - Feb 16, 2010 12:47:30 pm PST #3078 of 6732
Because books.
I'm so sorry, Allyson.
Allyson - Feb 16, 2010 12:55:58 pm PST #3079 of 6732
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica
I know it happens. Just, you know. kicks rock
Gudanov - Feb 16, 2010 1:04:52 pm PST #3080 of 6732
Coding and Sleeping
Sorry Allyson. You don't suck it's a tough business.
Burrell - Feb 16, 2010 1:09:27 pm PST #3081 of 6732
Why did Darth Vader cross the road? To get to the Dark Side!
Ugh Allyson, I'm sorry. You don't suck, it's the process that sucks. I know it has to be this way, but it's hard to gird yourself for rejection.
And just so's you know, you are still my hero and I STILL aspire to have the kind of guts you have to pursue writing.