I'll give it a look if you don't mind an almost completely uninformed opinion. Profile addy is good.
It's possible that he's in the land of perpetual Wednesday, or the crazy melty land, or you know, the world without shrimp.
Anya ,'Showtime'
The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?
A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.
-t - Oct 25, 2009 4:32:36 pm PDT #2702 of 6690
I am a woman of various inclinations and only some of the time are they to burn everything down in frustration
Gudanov - Oct 25, 2009 4:44:33 pm PDT #2703 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping
I'm not a crime fic dude, but I'll take a look at it if you want. Profile address is fine.
For a tale set in the twelfth century I used a dictionary and thesaurus published in the 1950s.
That's kinda brilliant.
erikaj - Oct 25, 2009 6:06:36 pm PDT #2704 of 6690
Always Anti-fascist!
Well, I don't think the problems are very genre-related...maybe, but I'll deal with the non-specific ones first.
Gudanov - Oct 26, 2009 5:38:28 am PDT #2705 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping
Despite a busy weekend with a trick-or-treating event, house painting, pumpkin carving, and tearing apart my computer to rebuild it better, stronger, faster, I managed to get a big of work in. I finished off my critique and started up on chapter 23.
I'm not happy with the way 23 is starting though, I'm burning up too many words with the all new part that starts off the chapter.
sj - Oct 26, 2009 7:21:51 am PDT #2706 of 6690
"There are few hours in life more agreeable than the hour dedicated to the ceremony known as afternoon tea."
New drabble topic: Costumes.
Allyson - Oct 26, 2009 8:27:36 am PDT #2707 of 6690
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica
We're ready to go! I just need to make two changes to some dialogue, and then she'll submit this week (or possibly next if western civilization collapses).
She says it's a good book and can picture people reading it to their kids at night.
This is EXACTLY the sentence I needed to read.
Oh. I'm just so glad to have written another submission-worthy book.
I thought it was a fluke the first time around. Even if I don't make a sale, this was a huge hump to get over for me. I'm so relieved/grateful/teary.
Barb - Oct 26, 2009 8:30:06 am PDT #2708 of 6690
“Not dead yet!”
Congrats, Allyson!
And I know what you mean. You can have everyone and their mother telling you it's fabulous and wonderful, but when it comes from someone who has the ability to get it out there, there's a different sense of validation involved there.
Gudanov - Oct 26, 2009 8:35:10 am PDT #2709 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping
Great news Allyson, congratulations!
Atropa - Oct 26, 2009 8:47:19 am PDT #2710 of 6690
The artist formerly associated with cupcakes.
YAY ALLYSON!!
Allyson - Oct 26, 2009 8:52:38 am PDT #2711 of 6690
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica
Tim keeps saying, "I told you so."