Wesley: I stabbed you. I should apologize for that. But I'm honestly not sure how. I think it'll just be awkward. Gunn: Good call. Wesley: Okay.

'Time Bomb'


The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Allyson - Sep 14, 2009 1:01:39 pm PDT #2223 of 6690
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

That's not how it works, through, Amy. I figure, Kate will get back to me in early October, then if we're good to go, she'll try and get it out before publishing goes hibernating for the winter. And even if all goes well, I don't expect to know one way or the other until the new year if anyone will buy it.

But, you know, I STILL HATE WAITING.


Amy - Sep 14, 2009 1:07:22 pm PDT #2224 of 6690
Because books.

Oh, I hate it, too, believe me. I waited almost five months to hear the editor at Harlequin is giving the zombie book to her superior. I'm just saying, try not to dwell! It only makes it worse.


Ginger - Sep 14, 2009 1:09:32 pm PDT #2225 of 6690
"It didn't taste good. It tasted soooo horrible. It tasted like....a vodka martini." - Matilda

I just admire Gud and Allyson and the rest of you who have actually finished books. I've never gotten to the point of knowing what my editing style on my own books would be.

My only equivalent would be the long, heavily researched magazine articles I've written. With those, I usually start with a version that's about 10 times as long as it needs to be, and then throw away words until it's the right length. I don't think I'm a very good beta reader of other people's stuff, because I have trouble thinking of it in big terms, like what's not working about this character or whether this scene should be elsewhere. What I think I'm good at is close editing: finding better words; making the subject and object agree; fixing punctuation; and omitting needless words.


Allyson - Sep 14, 2009 1:13:08 pm PDT #2226 of 6690
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

OMG the zombie book!!!! LOVE!!! Did I ever write back? I didn't, did I? Awful, self-absorbed bitch I've been.


Amy - Sep 14, 2009 1:14:10 pm PDT #2227 of 6690
Because books.

You didn't.

::weeps into hankie::

I'm excellent at close editing, too, Ginger, but I have to do it separately from big picture editing. I do that first, then look at the little pieces.


Allyson - Sep 14, 2009 1:16:52 pm PDT #2228 of 6690
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

Well then I must. I'm in the middle of a science book, right now, almost done!


Allyson - Sep 14, 2009 1:20:54 pm PDT #2229 of 6690
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

Um, if it's still wanted. I'm a zombie afficianado, afterall.


Amy - Sep 14, 2009 1:22:02 pm PDT #2230 of 6690
Because books.

Please, send away. I like praise feedback as much as the next person.


Barb - Sep 14, 2009 1:33:44 pm PDT #2231 of 6690
“Not dead yet!”

::languishes in corner, victim of own genre and general slackertude::


Jesse - Sep 14, 2009 2:15:47 pm PDT #2232 of 6690
Sometimes I trip on how happy we could be.

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