See, in my fantasy, when I'm kissing you... you're kissing me. It's okay. I can wait.

Oz ,'First Date'


The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Gudanov - Jul 21, 2009 6:59:28 am PDT #1855 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping

I'm moving along, but I'm looking forward getting to a part where I'm not completely rewriting everything.


Allyson - Jul 21, 2009 9:16:31 am PDT #1856 of 6690
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

I have one last rewrite to do before Agent Kate can send it out to editors.

Quick! Say something encouraging!!!!


Connie Neil - Jul 21, 2009 9:23:14 am PDT #1857 of 6690
brillig

Yay, Allyson!


Laura - Jul 21, 2009 9:28:18 am PDT #1858 of 6690
Our wings are not tired.

I have one last rewrite to do before Agent Kate can send it out to editors.

Encouraging words:

one last
Agent
editors

These are all good things. Go to it!

edited for line breaks!


Gudanov - Jul 21, 2009 9:28:41 am PDT #1859 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping

Go Allyson!


Allyson - Jul 21, 2009 9:34:00 am PDT #1860 of 6690
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

I'm a nervous wreck. I mean, if Kate wants a second round of edits and is putting in the time to smooth it all out, then she thinks it's got a good shot. I'm having a bout of Imposter Syndrome, but other than that, I'm hopeful!


erikaj - Jul 21, 2009 10:57:30 am PDT #1861 of 6690
Always Anti-fascist!

Go, Allyson! Although I can have IS totally sitting in here working alone so I do get it


Barb - Jul 21, 2009 11:05:56 am PDT #1862 of 6690
“Not dead yet!”

Back to writing after nearly two weeks off between the vacation and RWA Nationals. Three chapters revised with nearly a thousand new words in a scene. Making note of where I'm going to need to cut further ahead, because some of a future scene is now redundant.

It's like playing a game of chess.


Liese S. - Jul 21, 2009 1:22:53 pm PDT #1863 of 6690
"Faded like the lilac, he thought."

Yup, I am made of Imposter Syndrome, so I totally sympathize. But you are, in point of fact, awesome, and Agent Kate loves your book. Do the polishing, rock it out, and off it goes!

Yay for Gud. I do the researching thing, like your wife, and I'm glad she's interested, but you should feel free with drawing your own lines, Gud. Also, you should feel free to ask for betas when you're ready for them, and we can be all interferey ourselves. Hee. Because we're going to love your book.

Yay for Barb back to writing! We have an awfully active thread all of a sudden, even without drabbles!


Gudanov - Jul 21, 2009 6:31:53 pm PDT #1864 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping

Also, you should feel free to ask for betas when you're ready for them, and we can be all interferey ourselves.

Is that volunteering? I'd love to have somebody else give it a read, but I don't want to ask since this is going to be in the area of 150,000 - 160,000 words.