Chapter 16 is slow but interesting to write. My 3rd person limited perspective is on a new and very different character will a different outlook on things. That character is interacting with the character who had been the central character in chapters 1-12 and 15. And they don't speak a common language. Then there is the intimate scene in the chapter. There are only two of those in the whole story. I guess I'll see how that goes. Also, I don't think I'm taking full advantage of the new perspective, but that's what revision is for I suppose.
Buffy: I was regrouping. Spike: You were about to be regrouped into separate piles.
'Potential'
The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?
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Gudanov - May 26, 2009 5:15:21 am PDT #1592 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping
erikaj - May 26, 2009 9:36:20 am PDT #1593 of 6690
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About how long do you want your chapters? I'm never sure, myself.
Gudanov - May 26, 2009 9:42:00 am PDT #1594 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping
My chapters are ending up around 5000 - 6000 words though I'm just breaking where it seems like a good place for a break or where there is an obvious break in the story. Chapter 15 was only around 1000 words though as there was no logical way to put it into another chapter.
Beverly - May 26, 2009 11:56:53 am PDT #1595 of 6690
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.
Gud, break your chapters a page or two after the obvious scene ender. You want your reader reluctant to put the book down. Don't tie a bow on a chapter for them, make them read on!
Gudanov - May 26, 2009 4:58:51 pm PDT #1596 of 6690
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That sounds like a good idea. Not many chapters really leave things wrapped up, but I'll have to remember that when revising and see if I need to shift some endings around.
Gudanov - May 26, 2009 5:32:42 pm PDT #1597 of 6690
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I'm in the middle of writing the intimate scene in Chapter 16 so, of course, I'm getting bombarded by interruptions.
Gudanov - May 27, 2009 4:41:07 am PDT #1598 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping
I finished up Chapter 16 somehow last night. That puts me at 95k words. Chapter 17 will be a short one so maybe tonight I can crank it out. Chapter 18 should be fun to write it will be the only chapter in which to story is told from the perspective of the most interesting character in the story.
Amy - May 27, 2009 4:43:05 am PDT #1599 of 6690
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Great progress, Gud.
Although I will say, it's cracking me up that you refer to it as an "intimate scene." I say that with love, though. And ... as someone who is pretty blase about writing what I fondly call straight-up smut.
Barb - May 27, 2009 4:46:28 am PDT #1600 of 6690
“Not dead yet!”
Although I will say, it's cracking me up that you refer to it as an "intimate scene." I say that with love, though. And ... as someone who is pretty blase about writing what I fondly call straight-up smut.
Amy is me. *g*
Ailleann - May 27, 2009 4:48:03 am PDT #1601 of 6690
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Yay smut!
... What?