Mal: Ready? Zoe: Always.

'Serenity'


The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Beverly - May 26, 2009 11:56:53 am PDT #1595 of 6690
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

Gud, break your chapters a page or two after the obvious scene ender. You want your reader reluctant to put the book down. Don't tie a bow on a chapter for them, make them read on!


Gudanov - May 26, 2009 4:58:51 pm PDT #1596 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping

That sounds like a good idea. Not many chapters really leave things wrapped up, but I'll have to remember that when revising and see if I need to shift some endings around.


Gudanov - May 26, 2009 5:32:42 pm PDT #1597 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping

I'm in the middle of writing the intimate scene in Chapter 16 so, of course, I'm getting bombarded by interruptions.


Gudanov - May 27, 2009 4:41:07 am PDT #1598 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping

I finished up Chapter 16 somehow last night. That puts me at 95k words. Chapter 17 will be a short one so maybe tonight I can crank it out. Chapter 18 should be fun to write it will be the only chapter in which to story is told from the perspective of the most interesting character in the story.


Amy - May 27, 2009 4:43:05 am PDT #1599 of 6690
Because books.

Great progress, Gud.

Although I will say, it's cracking me up that you refer to it as an "intimate scene." I say that with love, though. And ... as someone who is pretty blase about writing what I fondly call straight-up smut.


Barb - May 27, 2009 4:46:28 am PDT #1600 of 6690
“Not dead yet!”

Although I will say, it's cracking me up that you refer to it as an "intimate scene." I say that with love, though. And ... as someone who is pretty blase about writing what I fondly call straight-up smut.

Amy is me. *g*


Ailleann - May 27, 2009 4:48:03 am PDT #1601 of 6690
vanguard of the socialist Hollywood liberal homosexualist agenda

Yay smut!

... What?


Gudanov - May 27, 2009 4:50:04 am PDT #1602 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping

It really wasn't all that smutty. The other one in the book needs to be rewritten and will probably get smuttier.


Gudanov - May 27, 2009 5:13:13 am PDT #1603 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping

I've also now added a new layer to backing up my work. Every time I work on it I follow by backing it up to my network drive which is a redundant array. Now I'm taking to e-mailing my gmail account with everything attached. Word processor files are so wonderfully small.


Amy - May 27, 2009 5:14:55 am PDT #1604 of 6690
Because books.

Emailed attachments are smart. You can also create Googledocs, too.