No, Sail, comments would be more helpful as soon before Friday as possible, but even after Friday I'm really interested in feedback both for future submissions of this story and in general to help improve my writing. Thanks for asking and for volunteering your time.
River: 1001. 1002. Simon: River... River: Shh. I'm counting between the lightning and the thunder to see if the storm is coming or going. .1005
'The Message'
The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?
A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.
Wolfram - Mar 16, 2009 7:13:03 pm PDT #1314 of 6690
Visilurking
Atropa - Mar 19, 2009 10:13:22 am PDT #1315 of 6690
The artist formerly associated with cupcakes.
I WILL HAVE BOUND PROOFS OF THE BOOK SOMETIME NEXT WEEK!!
Toddson - Mar 19, 2009 10:15:47 am PDT #1316 of 6690
Friends don't let friends read "Atlas Shrugged"
yay!
sj - Mar 19, 2009 11:40:12 am PDT #1317 of 6690
"There are few hours in life more agreeable than the hour dedicated to the ceremony known as afternoon tea."
Yay, Jilli!
Wolfram - Mar 19, 2009 3:31:47 pm PDT #1318 of 6690
Visilurking
Congrats!
SailAweigh - Mar 20, 2009 9:10:11 am PDT #1319 of 6690
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb
Wolfram, insent.
Wolfram - Mar 20, 2009 11:29:05 am PDT #1320 of 6690
Visilurking
Thanks Sail!
Gudanov - Mar 27, 2009 8:56:24 am PDT #1321 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping
Congrats Jilli!
I've started writing a book even though I have no business writing a book, but I come up with ideas for stories all the time and I want to try writing one down.
Wolfram - Mar 30, 2009 7:35:26 am PDT #1322 of 6690
Visilurking
First rejection. I'm disappointed, but not terribly. On to the next mag.
Gudanov - Mar 30, 2009 9:03:17 am PDT #1323 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping
I hope the next one goes better.
I find that my old nemesis, lack of time, has become my greatest obstacle.