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The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


erikaj - Dec 06, 2008 7:06:19 pm PST #1215 of 6690
Always Anti-fascist!

Mystery fans: Is getting your detective protagonist roughed up necessary, played-out, or somewhere in between?


Ginger - Dec 06, 2008 7:54:40 pm PST #1216 of 6690
"It didn't taste good. It tasted soooo horrible. It tasted like....a vodka martini." - Matilda

It depends on whether it happens all the time or not. If our hero gets roughed up too frequently, I tend to start worrying about his judgment and his medical plan. Mainly, I get irritated if he or she gets roughed up because he did something really stupid.

I was just thinking about something similar after reading one book in which I never felt as if the protagonist was in jeopardy and another in which I thought the oft repeated jeopardy began to seem contrived. It's a fine line.


Amy - Dec 07, 2008 2:08:43 pm PST #1217 of 6690
Because books.

I think it depends on what the story demands, erika. If it's set up well and means something -- either in character development or moving the plot -- then go for it.

The danger is something like Giles getting knocked out all the time, I think. That was played as a running gag after a while, of course, but in a novel, unless your tone is pretty light, that's harder to pull off.


Typo Boy - Dec 13, 2008 7:02:13 am PST #1218 of 6690
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

AU Channel Christmas Specials

Carl The Christmas Vampire

Little Match Girl II: She's back from the dead and out for revenge.

Saving Pottersville: Can the people of a thriving metropolis be saved from an evil spell that seeks to make them vanish as though they'd never existed?

Dreidel of the Dead: "shin" in this game will cost you more than just Hanukkah gelt.

CSI North Pole: who killed the sinister Arctic sweatshop owner with the midget fetish?


Anne W. - Dec 13, 2008 7:18:09 am PST #1219 of 6690
The lost sheep grow teeth, forsake their lambs, and lie with the lions.

Little Match Girl II: She's back from the dead and out for revenge.

That is wonderful. There are no words for how much I loathe the original story.


Typo Boy - Dec 13, 2008 7:21:17 am PST #1220 of 6690
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

It was the first one I came up with.


Ginger - Dec 13, 2008 7:42:03 am PST #1221 of 6690
"It didn't taste good. It tasted soooo horrible. It tasted like....a vodka martini." - Matilda

The Terror of Jingle Bells: Who will survive the race with the wolf pack?

The Terror of Jingle Bells II: They've eaten Grandma. Who will be next?

Little Match Girl III: She's back with her matches and this time she has gasoline

CSI NY: The bearded man at Macy's claimed he was Santa, but what was he doing with little girls?

Other AU sequels:

Little Red Ridinghood II: Revenge of the She Wolf

Little Red Ridinghood III: The Woodsman with his Ax Gave Grandma 40 Whacks

Jack and the Beanstalk II: The Ho-ho-horrible Revenge of the Giants


Typo Boy - Dec 13, 2008 7:51:12 am PST #1222 of 6690
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

Cool, Ginger. Anyone else?


Connie Neil - Dec 13, 2008 10:11:10 am PST #1223 of 6690
brillig

Frosty the Snow-man: The first taste is free.

Rudolph the Red Nosed Reindeer II: Payback's a bitch.

We Three Kings, the Rambo Remix: The Kings arrive with their palace guards and have a showdown when Herod's troops show up.

A Christmas Carol (rejected concepts): Christmas Future--The Cratchits sell their oldest daughter to Mother Fitz to get the money for Tiny Tim's medical care.

(sorry about the last one, Victorian England was a nasty place)


Laga - Dec 13, 2008 10:22:09 am PST #1224 of 6690
You should know I'm a big deal in the Resistance.

Murder on 34th Street