Feedback from my editor:

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I haven't done a full read of it yet, but initial thoughts (aside from the fact that it's wonderful):

• The long quotes - I like these - let's keep them all in, if that's OK with you.
  

• Citations/endnotes: yes, I prefer the idea of having an endnotes section - could you get working on that?
  

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Of course, he's supposed to say it's wonderful, but it's nice to hear anyway.

aside from the fact that it's wonderful

Yay! And congrats on meeting the deadline, too.

msbelle, did you receive my e-mail?

Yay for wonderful!!

I am craving a grilled cheese and/or hot wings.

I will have the big salad I brought and I'm sure it will be delicious but...still grilled cheese.

I usually get a flu shot. Mostly because my old company provided them.

yes Nilly, I did. glad it got there. is that one of the roommates I met? If so say hello.

Well, I met something like my fourth extended deadline. But I did meet it.

Thanks, all! It's starting to feel like it really is done. We're going to turn the edits around this week so it'll be pretty quick.

My workplace gives free flu shots, and so does mr. flea's school. We both get them, what with the having tiny kids, who are at special risk (the kids get them too, obviously). I don't know that I've ever had The Flu - I get colds sometimes, but I've never had something that knocked me on my ass for 2 weeks. I've been getting the shots every year since 2004, though.

I've never been inoculated. It seems unwise for me to add stuff to the chemical soup that is my blood, but on the other hand, migraines make even a cold so much worse--I'd be a puling mess if I caught the flu.

I get colds sometimes, but I've never had something that knocked me on my ass for 2 weeks.

Yeah, the year I got the flu, it was a revelation. I'm sure I had the flu as a kid, but it kicked my ass as an adult. I was at work, standing up and talking to my bosses, and then I realized that I needed to lean against a wall *right now* if I wanted to keep standing.

And then I was miserable and weak for like ten days. My husband had to prod me to eat.

How many of you get flu shots?

Uh, never? I don't think I have, anyway. I get the flu every three years or so. I'm not at high risk, and I don't know if getting the shot would really improve my odds.

is that one of the roommates I met? If so say hello.

Yup, you did, and I absolutely will! She was thrilled to know it was from you, because she remembered you, as well (and then I updated her regarding mac).

I never got a flu shot, and I think that, thankfully, I never got The Flu. Many people here get the shots. Some of them, then, just get a different kind of flu than that (or those?) they were immunized against, so the whole thing turns out to be more bother than help for them.