You know, I've saved lives. Dozens. Maybe hundreds. I reattached a girl's leg. Her whole leg. She named her hamster after me. I got a hamster. He drops a box of money, he gets a town.

Simon ,'Jaynestown'


Procedurals 1: Anything You Say Can and Will Be Used Against You.

This thread is for procedural TV, shows where the primary idea is to figure out the case. [NAFDA]


Kristen - Apr 08, 2009 2:31:08 pm PDT #2729 of 11831

I really liked the drop down/pop up/whatever it is actually called feature.

Sometimes, when I'm outlining, I'll have notes about a beat -- a funny line I want to remember, the tone a scene should have, etc. -- so I'd like to be able to include those somewhere. But I also want to be able to hide those notes so I can see just the beats in order and figure out what I'm missing.

I have no idea if that made any sense outside of my head.


Barb - Apr 08, 2009 3:01:23 pm PDT #2730 of 11831
“Not dead yet!”

I'm the whack job who just keeps notebooks. Part of it is my own addiction to blank journals, so I figure I should use them for something. The other is my own linear writing style-- the thought of breaking things down into arcs and turning points and beats makes me twitch.

But dang, that board was way cool.


Juliebird - Apr 08, 2009 3:15:33 pm PDT #2731 of 11831
I am the fly who dreams of the spider

I have no idea if that made any sense outside of my head.

Perfect, total, utter sense.


aurelia - Apr 08, 2009 4:05:52 pm PDT #2732 of 11831
All sorrows can be borne if you put them into a story. Tell me a story.

I wonder if a system could be made to white board my design process.

I just missed the Life teaser. Did I miss anything important?


Juliebird - Apr 08, 2009 4:31:54 pm PDT #2733 of 11831
I am the fly who dreams of the spider

Just holy-shit-awesomeness.

Roman kills the interviewer, takes the video camera and wander the halls of his lair, showcasing men with guns and dogs and women giggling and men drinking and playing cards, then revealing Dani bound to a chair with a hood over her head. She spits at the camera and looks gorgeous doing so. He changes the tape and tells her to talk. She says "Crews" and the scene goes to static and titles.


Kristen - Apr 08, 2009 4:48:40 pm PDT #2734 of 11831

the thought of breaking things down into arcs and turning points and beats makes me twitch.

I'm not sure if structure is what made TV writing my thing or if learning to write TV molded my brain around structure. Since I can't remember, it will probably always be a chicken or egg type question.


Juliebird - Apr 08, 2009 4:53:39 pm PDT #2735 of 11831
I am the fly who dreams of the spider

Life is making me twitch (in a good way).

My hands were shaking as I hit the remote to see if there was any time left.

eep!


Juliebird - Apr 08, 2009 5:03:26 pm PDT #2736 of 11831
I am the fly who dreams of the spider

Rand Ravich was right, if Life doesn't come back, I'm hella satisfied with how it ended. The last two minutes I had a giant cat-ate-the-canary grin on my face.

How much do I adore how Charlie took Roman out? The elegant simplicity of it. The badassery. So Zen, so Charlie Crews.


aurelia - Apr 08, 2009 5:14:28 pm PDT #2737 of 11831
All sorrows can be borne if you put them into a story. Tell me a story.

Just holy-shit-awesomeness.

Damn.


Juliebird - Apr 08, 2009 5:22:12 pm PDT #2738 of 11831
I am the fly who dreams of the spider

I need to take those words back and apply them to the end of the show, or find better, greater-than holy-shit-awesome adjectives.