They seem good to me, Sue. And I think it's good to link the ettiquette page at the end, just in case someone's got to the FAQ without reading it.
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Sue, I'm betting you'd notice them before they got anywhere, but there are a couple of typos:
first paragraph: note under their use[r]name saying
second paragraph: alllows you [to]
FAQ answer:
1st paragraph: person's usernname
2nd paragraph: is say[i]ng
3rd paragraph: extraneous comma between peace, and
I agree the consistent demon-like behaviour warning should be there, though I think it should be will, not may.
Thanks for the input, and especially the proofread. I corrected a bunch of typose and stuff last night, but I knew I didn't get them all.
I quoted the "demon-like" behaviour bit right from the ettiquette page, and it uses "may" there.
I figured you got it from somewhere else around here. We're awfully nice people. *g*
Can I have fifteen testing volunteers, please?
Do they need to actually know stuff? Because if they don't, then I'd love to try and help.
Ooh, ooh! Pick me!!!
I'll test. What are we testing?
I can test for a few hours.
Pick me! Pick me! I have school work to do and things to put away!