Well that was a much more disturbing (and interesting) torture scene than what ME showed us.

I think your Glory is close. It's been awhile since I've seen a full episode with her, but she's more...I'm not sure. I like the Tentpeg, stake thing though.

You broke Spike's cheekbone. HIS CHEEKBONE!!! You bastard!

I like your Glory, but maybe she needs more of the princess tone - I'm not sure that you can replicate her horrible pronunciation, the d'ing of ts and the like.

Not airheady enough, got it.

And what about the CHEEKBONE!!!! It's like, like, like doodling a moustache on the Mona Lisa.

Yeah, Glory could use a little more airhead. (oh, dear. Porn hath corrupted me.)

Also 'goons'? It may be canon, I can't remember, but I thought it was a British word- it doesn't feel quite right with the American voices.

Elena is right about the cheekbone, too. Evil in a good way.

And-while I'm talking to you, connie, you're evil in a bad way, too. I posted the second Bun story at ff.n yesterday, and this morning I have two new reviews, both of which are good and imply I should write another one. Good is nice, but writing another one is not.

Also 'goons'? It may be canon, I can't remember, but I thought it was a British word- it doesn't feel quite right with the American voices.

Pretty sure we use goons pretty often stateside.

Pretty sure we use goons pretty often stateside.

That's pretty good, then, my pretty one.

Sixty-three more words and I can go to bed.

Goons. Hired goons. t /Simpsons

Goons is a perfectly cromulent words. And used quite often in Canada to refer to a certain type of hockey player. In Britain I believe that it might refer more to a goofy kind of person - here it's a not-so-bright tough.

You think you won't write a third, but we all know better.

And I did actually pause a moment before I let the cheekbone moment go forward. But then I thought, "He's a vampire, it'll heal." Authors are cruel.