woohoo Victor, very nice. You're going to keep writing fic as time allows, right?
for a gift., so I brought him to his shop.”
you have an extra period.
“Wait,” said Giles, turning to James. “Your worst fear is being shouted at by a cartoon ghost?”
Right, so you got me,” said Ethan. “Bully for you.”
The commas here should be periods, or the Y/B should be lower case.
As they say in Wayne's World, Victor, "Totally excellent Scooby-doo ending!"
you have an extra period.
Well that can't be good. All fixed.
The commas here should be periods, or the Y/B should be lower case.
I agree in one case, but not the other, if I see what you're talking about.
As they say in Wayne's World, Victor, "Totally excellent Scooby-doo ending!"
Thank you! Scooby endings are highly underrated.
And I've left some Tim/ Faith in the LJ, not sure how to link it here.Still trying to get the kinks out...or is it in?And I'm the worst judge of myown work so...http://www.livejournal.com/users/chicating/1283.html?view=6403#t6403
“Let him do the Clouseau,” whispered Buffy. “Man needs a hobby.”
buhWAH!
erika, I've never tried, but I think I know. Lemme go look....
erika, you click on the comment button of that particular LJ entry, and then link to THAT specific URL. That way it takes people to the entry you want, not just to your journal as a whole.
victor.... wow. Some ending.
I have enjoyed that, very much.
erika, if you click on the 'post comments' link at the bottom of your journal entry, and then take that URL, it'll be a link straight to the entry. easy. once you know.
Oh, ok. Maybe I'll wait...it's kind of(Makes so-so handwave thing.)
Well that can't be good.
Hee. There's another one:
It’s my guess Ethan walked out of his U.S. army prison disguised. as a soldier,” she said. “Isn’t that right?”
The commas here should be periods, or the Y/B should be lower case.
I agree in one case, but not the other, if I see what you're talking about.
I think this is a point of punctuation that may have changed from what I was taught. Sorry about that.
Oh, that was
fun,
Victor. Nice one.