(I didn't spellcheck, because I'm a freak, and it's 2:10 in the AM here.)
Edited to add:
have now spellchecked. Please ignore spelling errors.
(And yes, I do have more, but I haven't polished it at all, so it's still in the doc, not here. It's only 919 words more so far. You have most of it.)
I really love this story.
I really love this story.
t beams
I finally managed to get the passage that was bothering me worked out. I almost cried. The rough transition was really, really frustrating. If I'm really good, and don't start playing around, I can hit 19000 words tonight.
Wow, that was nice to wake up to. Thanks, Plei.
He all. Thanks for the notes. A handful of edits on the last part.
In all honesty, I think there's only three or four parts to go. Maybe five.
I think there's only three or four parts to go. Maybe five.
Mooooommmmmm- Victor's being mean to us.
Plei, I so very much adore this story. I love an unconventional pairing that's so beautifully crafted, it doesn't read like slash, it reads like a script idea regretfully abandoned by the PTB because the storyline didn't quite mesh with the pairings they'd decided to follow. Brava, sweetie. Gorgeous.
Fay! I loved that! Mean to to say so earlier but I've been inventorying at Nic's office and have been basically asleep when not performing said count-y task.
Plei, ignoring the spelling, there's a word missing:
She didn't realize was struggling until he rolled off of her
Isn't that *she* was struggling?
(And oh, crap, "Britney bend like that" made me make a noise....)
(edit refux: and Victor's a tease.)
Word added!
(Well, okay, word added to the draft; I'm too lazy to go back to the actual thing.)
The NSync stuff, I fear, made me giggle. I think it's the part I like best in all the world.
I could frellin' hear Lorne saying that.
hey, what time is good for phone call, to discuss trees and bunnifications and thangs? Are we talking after dark? I'm up in AIM right now, but I'm highly undercaffeinated.
hey, what time is good for phone call, to discuss trees and bunnifications and thangs? Are we talking after dark? I'm up in AIM right now, but I'm highly undercaffeinated.
After seven pm is good. Allows me time for naps/coffee/husband and possibly taking measurements of Pete and Jilli's yard for Future Use.