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Where the Buffistas let their fanfic creative juices flow. May contain erotica.

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Lee - Jul 04, 2003 2:30:13 pm PDT #4797 of 10001

The feeling you get when your brain finally lets your heart get in its pants.

Very nice Victor. I can't wait to see where this is going.

I just finished edited something, and was in the flow, so I hope you don't mind a couple of minor editing points.

Bored Bored about covers it.

You need a period or comma here.

“Then why is it here?” asked Wesley. “And who set her after you.” Angel flicked another button, and an image of the female vampire they’d fought earlier appeared.

The "And who set her after you" needs a question mark. Also, it confused me at first, with the switch from it to her. Maybe put it after the next sentence?

said Spike, snippily. “Care to share?”

Is Spike snippy? Somehow that word seemed wrong. Can't think of a better one though.

victor infante - Jul 04, 2003 2:36:00 pm PDT #4798 of 10001

To understand what happened at the diner, we shall use Mr. Papaya! This is upsetting because he's the friendliest of fruits.

I know not where the typo monster comes from, but it haunts me.

I blame terrorists.

Lee - Jul 04, 2003 2:37:56 pm PDT #4799 of 10001

The feeling you get when your brain finally lets your heart get in its pants.

Personally I blame the elves that live inside my computer, but that's just me.

Elena - Jul 04, 2003 3:47:58 pm PDT #4800 of 10001

Thanks for all the fish.

Victor, it's delicious. And, Xander stakes Angel? So he really was there when Angel died. Most excellent.

PMM, can't wait to get more of the drabbles.

Steph L. - Jul 04, 2003 6:36:49 pm PDT #4801 of 10001

this mess was yours / now your mess is mine

Victor, I am LOVING this!

victor infante - Jul 04, 2003 8:16:46 pm PDT #4802 of 10001

To understand what happened at the diner, we shall use Mr. Papaya! This is upsetting because he's the friendliest of fruits.

Victor, it's delicious. And, Xander stakes Angel? So he really was there when Angel died. Most excellent.

Heh. Because tormenting characters with what they ask for? Fun.

More coming. The end is in sight. Only 45 parts left.

Lee - Jul 04, 2003 8:20:53 pm PDT #4803 of 10001

The feeling you get when your brain finally lets your heart get in its pants.

More coming.

want.

Now.

Elena - Jul 04, 2003 8:23:17 pm PDT #4804 of 10001

Thanks for all the fish.

Perkins is wise.

victor infante - Jul 04, 2003 8:24:59 pm PDT #4805 of 10001

To understand what happened at the diner, we shall use Mr. Papaya! This is upsetting because he's the friendliest of fruits.

Maybe more tomorrow. Need to sleep.

Deena - Jul 04, 2003 8:31:28 pm PDT #4806 of 10001

How are you me? You need to stop that. Only I can be me. ~Kara

Nooooo! no sleep!

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