Very nice Victor. I can't wait to see where this is going.
I just finished edited something, and was in the flow, so I hope you don't mind a couple of minor editing points.
Bored Bored about covers it.
You need a period or comma here.
“Then why is it here?” asked Wesley. “And who set her after you.” Angel flicked another button, and an image of the female vampire they’d fought earlier appeared.
The "And who set her after you" needs a question mark. Also, it confused me at first, with the switch from it to her. Maybe put it after the next sentence?
said Spike, snippily. “Care to share?”
Is Spike snippy? Somehow that word seemed wrong. Can't think of a better one though.