Oh, Victor, that was lovely.
Am, I like that too. I hope there's more of it.
I can't wait for the rest of Deb's story. It's too funny.
'Safe'
Where the Buffistas let their fanfic creative juices flow. May contain erotica.
Oh, Victor, that was lovely.
Am, I like that too. I hope there's more of it.
I can't wait for the rest of Deb's story. It's too funny.
the rest of Deb's story
Yes!! I forgot to comment on this, silly me. Nifty as all get-out, Deb, can't wait to hear more about the pornalicious shopping baubles.
I like to see the big cats.
Snerk!
And I didn't comment on Am-chau's, either. This is what happens when you're trying to lurk/work, but keep getting sucked in by fun and clever stuff.
What I meant to type was...
lots of skin, folded and creased enough to hide playing cards or kittens or possibly a small Eiffel Tower in
Nice combo. And an amusing mental image.
That’s not coincidence. That’s a redundancy plan.
Oh, man. Victor, perfect take, bro.
Am, loving this.
I love that Clem is intrigued by the big cats at the zoo. It must be like looking into the window of Godiva's Chocolates for him.
victor, i have a word choice question. From part 5:
"But the real stickler was that there were now two Slayers who’d be sticking around."
According to the Online Etymological dictionary, a stickler is a
person who contends or insists stubbornly
first recorded in 1644. I do not think it means what you think it means. t /inigo montoya
Maybe something like "kicker," "hitch," "complication," "insert a better word here."
I feel strange beta-ing since I am only a consumer here. I was always better at reading and editing than writing.
Xander’s face went serious. “It could be here right now.”
An electric shock washed down Dawn’s spine, but she only hesitated a second, reaching instinctively for the knife Faith had given her, years ago. Xander calmed her immediately by placing his hand on her shoulder, never once taking his eyes off the First as it morphed into Anya’s form.” “How long you known, Harris?” it said, a perfect echo of her caustic tone.
Geez Victor, you gave me cold chills. I like the "no idea on the snow" too.
Am Chau, I want more of yours--how perfect to have Clem the one who finds and "rescues" Spike redux.
And Deb, you already know how much I'm loving Retail Therapy for Watchers.
smonster, I missed the "stickler" thing, and read it as "sticker": my brain took it in as a sort of Xander-speak slang for "sticking point".
deb, yes, me too the first time. i was rereading all the bits together (b/c i love it!) and it 'stuck' out, so to speak. even if it were 'sticker,' there's 'sticking around' later in the sentence, which victor could change if he so desired, i suppose.
hee. i'm offering constructive criticism in run-on sentences. so take it at your own risk.