Oh, Deena, loving it so.
"This is a new one on me. Am I Frankenstein?"
Frankenstein's Monster, to be accurate. And I think that Spike would be.
A guard, really the numbers, the ideas. They'd let anyone, and she was losing it, but, she stopped, smoothed her features. Really, there was no sense, but he'd ruined, still.
Can't quite make sense of this bit.
Deena, it's stunning. Really. Wonderful Fred - I love how crazed she is and how much the minions fear her.
Wonderful, Deena--great Fred voice, and Spike dialogue.
I'm not quite sure I could make sense of that bit, and you're right about the monster. Going back to fix.
Yay! Thank you all. It was fun to write.
Yay! Thanks, Deb. If I can keep it being this fun, I may continue with it.
I need to go back and finish my tiny little one for Plei - began it weeks ago and had to bail to deal with novel proofs. Mine was nowhere near as fun as this one is, though.