RL, that was beautiful.
They should film that story and show it every Christmas.
Xander ,'Same Time, Same Place'
Buffista Fic: It Could Be Plot Bunnies
Where the Buffistas let their fanfic creative juices flow. May contain erotica.
Deena - Jun 16, 2003 11:28:26 am PDT #4272 of 10001
How are you me? You need to stop that. Only I can be me. ~Kara
deborah grabien - Jun 16, 2003 11:34:08 am PDT #4273 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Deena, you should see the rest of the pieces Liz did for that. They're all amazing.
(and I got to beeeeeeta them, she said with intolerable smugness)
Rebecca Lizard - Jun 16, 2003 11:38:40 am PDT #4274 of 10001
You sip / say it's your crazy / straw say it's you're crazy / as you bicycle your soul / with beauty in your basket
I've actually never read anything long in 2nd person that I liked.
t has traumatic Bright Lights Big City flashbacks
I read that and During the Reign of the Queen of Persia (possibly am mangling that title, it's been a while) in one long playing-with-POV-and-style weekend....
Thanks, Deena, love.
Deena - Jun 16, 2003 11:40:03 am PDT #4275 of 10001
How are you me? You need to stop that. Only I can be me. ~Kara
I'd love to see the rest. Where?
Steph L. - Jun 16, 2003 11:44:35 am PDT #4276 of 10001
this mess was yours / now your mess is mine
I've actually never read anything long in 2nd person that I liked.
[has traumatic Bright Lights Big City flashbacks]
That's EXACTLY the execrable book I was thinking of when I said that!
Rebecca Lizard - Jun 16, 2003 11:47:04 am PDT #4277 of 10001
You sip / say it's your crazy / straw say it's you're crazy / as you bicycle your soul / with beauty in your basket
I'd love to see the rest. Where?
Not posted yet anywhere. I wrote most of it a while ago, and was just working on the fourth and hardest section last night. I had deb in AIM convincing me to finish it.
deborah grabien - Jun 16, 2003 11:48:49 am PDT #4278 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
I had deb in AIM convincing me to finish it.
I was evil, and wore leather, and bullied her mercilessly.
Because damn, it's a splendid set of pieces, all of it. And the fourth piece, definitely the most difficult in theme and execution, but, well, I have faith in my Lizard.
Deena - Jun 16, 2003 11:55:34 am PDT #4279 of 10001
How are you me? You need to stop that. Only I can be me. ~Kara
Okay, I want to read it whenever you're ready. Though, I'm sure that's a given. Go Deb in the leather.
taking a break, my fingers have given out on me. later lovelies.
Beverly - Jun 16, 2003 2:17:55 pm PDT #4280 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.
That fragment was haunting, Lizard. I've never liked second, but this was arresting, poised, as you say, between first and third.
I'd really like to read when it's done.
Rebecca Lizard - Jun 16, 2003 2:59:07 pm PDT #4281 of 10001
You sip / say it's your crazy / straw say it's you're crazy / as you bicycle your soul / with beauty in your basket
It's not part of a longer piece about Vampire!Willow, though-- it's no. two from my Five Things that Didn't Happen to Willow fic. It's my favorite of the sections, and it was by far the easiest to write.
That's been, in my head, how the story of Wishverse Willow went. I started this epic Story of Vamp!Willow that made it all the way to the morning before she got vamped before I got bored and frustrated.