Dawn: Any luck? Willow: If you define luck as the absence of success--plenty.

'Touched'


Buffista Fic: It Could Be Plot Bunnies  

Where the Buffistas let their fanfic creative juices flow. May contain erotica.


Am-Chau Yarkona - Jun 14, 2003 8:11:25 am PDT #4211 of 10001
I bop to Wittgenstein. -- Nutty

Ahem. Damn, online time too short! connie, I'll read and comment on that when I get to your LJ.

While I'm here, though, there's HH/FF crossover. Pure, unedited, unreread, as it tumbled out of my brain.

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“Even dyin’ don’t go smooth, seems,” he said, and was a little startled to find that when he looked up at the buildings on the horizon, they were moving, gently waving up and down.

“Sir?” Zoe said, over to his left. “Is it just me, or is something very strange here?”

“This is scary,” Wash put in, from further along the beach. “Zoe—can you please stop being a penguin?”

Before Mal could formulate a reply, a calm female voice announced, “Two to the power of one hundred thousand to one against and falling.”

River giggled. “Infinite improbability drive. Shiny.”

Mal looked right, past River, past Jayne, to Simon. “Doc,” he said, “if your sister knows where we are…”

“One to the power of…” the voice went on.

Simon had to shout to be heard over it. “I don’t think she does, captain. Not really.”

“Right,” Mal said, and watched his arm slowly reappear.

“We have normality,” said the voice, cheerfully. Various members of the crew made noises expressing deeply held cynicism. “I repeat, we have normality. Anything you still can’t cope with is therefore your own problem.”

“Okay.” Mal stood up, and took stock of his surroundings. They were in a small, luminous pink cubical, similar in shape and size to an airlock.

Jayne had his gun out and was standing by Kaylee, alternating between glancing round for anything attacking and watching Mal’s reactions.

Kaylee, in turn, was standing by Inara—in fact, Mal noted, they were holding hands—and trying to look confident.

River was leaning on one of the walls, listening to something behind it and muttering to her brother, who clearly wasn’t understanding a word, although he was trying.

Zoe and Wash were kissing passionately, apparently glad not to be penguins, and Book was on his knees, head bowed in prayer.

“It’s real shiny,” Kaylee said, staring at the sparkling clean walls. “All clean, like it was new.”

“It’s only been around for six lousy months and already there are more visitors,” drone a voice that sounded strangely like a man with his head in a metal bin. “Brain the size of a planet and all I ever get to do is escort visitors. Useless organic habit.”

They all looked around wildly for the source of the voice, and after a couple of seconds, the door slid open and Marvin appeared. Every jaw dropped simultaneously.

Wash’s was the first up, of course. “Hi,” he said. “Err… are you a *robot*?”

“I’m a cybernetic companion with a personality prototype. You can tell, can’t you?”

“That’s not possible,” Kaylee said, gaping.

“There are more things in heaven and earth,” Book told her, but added, “Robots aren’t mentioned normally, though.”

“I assure you, I am depressingly real,” Marvin said. “Now if you’ll be so kind as to follow me, which I expect you won’t, we’ll be going.” He turned and started to leave, glaring at the door as it opened with a happy sigh, but noone was following.

“Where ‘xactly are we goin’ to?” Mal asked.

“The bridge, of course, the current dwelling place of the other humans on this ship. If you don’t like that, frankly couldn’t care less, so pardon me fore breathing which I never do anyway so…” His voice droned on as he dragged himself up the corridor.

Mal looked around at his crew, decided it couldn’t get worse, shrugged, and gestured for them to follow the… whatever he was.


deborah grabien - Jun 14, 2003 8:13:10 am PDT #4212 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

“Zoe—can you please stop being a penguin?”

suhNERK! Deb just went back to a BBC Thursday night radio happy place...


P.M. Marc - Jun 14, 2003 8:20:59 am PDT #4213 of 10001
So come, my friends, be not afraid/We are so lightly here/It is in love that we are made; In love we disappear

Oh, Am! Snerk!

You deranged and wonderful girl!

Deb, good call, and so noted in the logs.


deborah grabien - Jun 14, 2003 8:26:27 am PDT #4214 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Plei, have I mentioned less than a hundred times recently how splendid your Wesley is? The reason I notice the tiny stuff is because you get him down so perfectly.

Am, I'm still giggling over here.


Connie Neil - Jun 14, 2003 8:47:54 am PDT #4215 of 10001
brillig

"Can you stop being a penguin?"

"Robots aren't generally mentioned."

Whee. Makes me regret not seeing the show.


Steph L. - Jun 14, 2003 10:12:34 am PDT #4216 of 10001
this mess was yours / now your mess is mine

Plei, my god. I am loving this. Please whip those 3,000 other words into shape.


P.M. Marc - Jun 14, 2003 10:22:09 am PDT #4217 of 10001
So come, my friends, be not afraid/We are so lightly here/It is in love that we are made; In love we disappear

Plei, my god. I am loving this. Please whip those 3,000 other words into shape.

Can I borrow the discipline I sent you? I need to finish the writing spurt I'm on before I can do much more whipping. (Writing this in a linear fashion has been interesting. It means writing to a point, then going back, re-reading, and seeing what I need to alter/expand/include so that things aren't just in my head. It's kinda cool.)


deborah grabien - Jun 14, 2003 10:25:15 am PDT #4218 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

lalalala, we are enabling Plei, lalalala.....

I've got oodles of spare discipline. Shall I send with cookies?


Elena - Jun 14, 2003 2:57:33 pm PDT #4219 of 10001
Thanks for all the fish.

Hey!

I will comment on fic later - just now I'll see YAY!connie and BWAH!Am and I'llReadItLater,Really!PMM.

But I want to add my two cents to the POV conversation. For me first person is easy to write. The character speaks to me (through me) and I'm just dictating. Second person is - to me - exactly the same as first person but at a distance. It's the character observing themselves and describing it.

I don't think that I need to be brave to write first person. I'm not inserting myself into the story - 'I' doesn't equal 'me'. But I notice that things that didn't seem inportant in Xander's POV (for example) were really important to Spike in ATF. It really was an interesting experience. And I cried quite a bit during the writing - just as I would if they had been telling the story to me.

Okay, back to work.


Rebecca Lizard - Jun 14, 2003 6:07:52 pm PDT #4220 of 10001
You sip / say it's your crazy / straw say it's you're crazy / as you bicycle your soul / with beauty in your basket

Even dyin' don't go smooth. I love that, Am.